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What Is, Is What It's Not
What is it
What's it not
Questions and answers
Over thinking a lot
Search the sky
Under every rock
A visionary
Sight is locked
Roll of the tongue
Feelings fall to floor
Opened widely
Crashing through that door
Heart in shock
Hearing burns wildly
To know what is
And what it's not
What's it not
Questions and answers
Over thinking a lot
Search the sky
Under every rock
A visionary
Sight is locked
Roll of the tongue
Feelings fall to floor
Opened widely
Crashing through that door
Heart in shock
Hearing burns wildly
To know what is
And what it's not
Published 2nd Mar 2017
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2nd Mar 2017 3:49pm
3rd Mar 2017 6:01am
I like this poem and felt a sense of struggle...(which, my tortured soul appreciates) Just my interpretation.
My only constructive feedback is in the consistency of "What is" and "What is it" ..."What it's not" and "What's it not". Just thinking if you avoid using contractions, the interpretation might be clearer.
They rhythm and rhyme are spot on. Thanks for sharing.
My only constructive feedback is in the consistency of "What is" and "What is it" ..."What it's not" and "What's it not". Just thinking if you avoid using contractions, the interpretation might be clearer.
They rhythm and rhyme are spot on. Thanks for sharing.
