Mea Culpa

I am in love with this short dazzling piece

im more than grateful for your feedback and reading list addition.
thank you my dear.

by this little number. excellent economy of 16 words, Miss. [:

hehe thank you dear :)

if u choose 2 creep
den u gotta b discrete
& ppl wont undastand da reason u r laffn
unaware of da many events dat hav happened
but driven by da passion
dat relieves da body of its fashion
dat takes pleasure beyond its peak
where even da sheets wil leak
is da only truth yet u neva even speak it
keep it on da low...dats if u want it 2 remain a secret....lol

hey! πριγκίπισσα

nice, short but nice.
if i had to give a critique it would be the double use of the word met. see because of the limited amount of words that you use i just felt that maybe you could have used a different one on one of the lines,

We pretend to be
strangers who
never touched,
who never kissed
and never met.
would be my suggestion.
all in i was not disappointed.
shine on!

What a little beauty, so much said in so few words