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A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
'The Downfall-'
Man will regret it
It's analphabetic,
how pathetic
the rhetoric of ignorance
run rampant is...unfeeling
For them who get it,
'prophetic the edit'
of darkened heart, from soul
as it will set shit on a course
into volitile, emotional upheaval
That will send into a frenzy
the proprietor/s of hatred's evil
invariably seeking division insufferably until it's eventual retrieval...the fallacy revealing
ultimately, now it's too late
to be pleading for it's healing...
Man will regret it
It's analphabetic,
how pathetic
the rhetoric of ignorance
run rampant is...unfeeling
For them who get it,
'prophetic the edit'
of darkened heart, from soul
as it will set shit on a course
into volitile, emotional upheaval
That will send into a frenzy
the proprietor/s of hatred's evil
invariably seeking division insufferably until it's eventual retrieval...the fallacy revealing
ultimately, now it's too late
to be pleading for it's healing...
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Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
17th Feb 2017 1:31am
Indeed such a powerful write it really speaks volumes of what's going on,
It even inspires me a little to do another observation poem of my own.
Great job baby that was absolutely perfecto.
It even inspires me a little to do another observation poem of my own.
Great job baby that was absolutely perfecto.
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Re: Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
17th Feb 2017 1:39am
Aaaaawwwww yea you know I love to inspire... So if this has done that, u need to post your piece! :) n I thank you my lil cutie pie boobie :) muah! Truly n always thankful for your support :)
Re: Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
17th Feb 2017 1:44am
Aww sure will baby pie, apple of my eye 😘❤️❤️ Mmmuah! Your welcome :)
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Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
17th Feb 2017 1:35am
Re: Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
17th Feb 2017 1:41am
Gosh, golly... Thank you ma'am... :) Truly grateful for ur sweet comment n support :)
Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
17th Feb 2017 6:56am
Ignorance run rampant; sad but true. Man should regret, that's the least he can do considering.
Well said...
Well said...
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Re: Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
17th Feb 2017 9:47am
Thank you my sweet friend, I'm honored once more by your thoughts n support. Appreciate that n you much :)
Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
17th Feb 2017 2:01pm
Emotional upheaval....Perfect way to describe it! Great writing, my friend, I am fascinated by the power of your soul!
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Re: Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
17th Feb 2017 2:55pm
Wow, n I'm touched by your words... thank you ssssooooooo much! truly grateful to u :)
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Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
Anonymous
18th Feb 2017 9:12am
yea Poe, so much unleashed stoopid out there
really dig this
xo
really dig this
xo
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Re: Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
13th Jun 2017 8:28pm
Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
Yea, you served this one nice man, real nice. Truth is truth, right.
gotta let it be known, especially for our young men and women
out here, Foreal, thanks, bro but aye it goes for us older peeps
too
Will
gotta let it be known, especially for our young men and women
out here, Foreal, thanks, bro but aye it goes for us older peeps
too
Will
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Re: Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
21st Feb 2017 10:20am
Yea it does at that bro... truly grateful for your strong support n I appreciate you greatly... peace n love to you n yours :)
Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
22nd Feb 2017 8:57am
Re: Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
22nd Feb 2017 10:23am
N God bless you, for being such a kind n supportive friend.... grateful you n that always my dear :)
Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
2nd Mar 2017 6:10pm
Your third stanza is one of the most awesome things I've ever read. I loved every line of this piece. Can't wait to read more!
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Re: Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
2nd Mar 2017 9:03pm
I'm humbled n grateful for your thoughts n time o my ink... truly appreciate it. :)
Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Jun 2017 1:54pm
13th Jun 2017 1:53pm
Oh dear,.. i can't speak nor move
Honey damn you
Honey damn you
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Re: Re. A Blackheart you Say? (Re-envisioned)
13th Jun 2017 8:50pm
Aaawww...I'm sorry sweetness, but I thank you for you time n thoughts n as always I'm deeply grateful too :)
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Anonymous
14th Jun 2017 7:23am
You're alright honey, the reflection just blinded me a little 😎
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