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Living In Your Dream
Floating across rivers, valleys, and streams
I'm thinking of living inside of your dreams
Running barefoot through nature, you chasing me
End up tripping and falling in love by the sea
We're two eagles that fly, soaring high in the sky
Letting the wind take our bodies, as life passes by
You're a delicate flower, I'm a young honey bee
Sucking your nectar with you encompassing me
Sliding down rainbows after a warm springtime mist
Laughter and giggles when on your cheek I plant my kiss
Your dream will not end having me inside of you
Nights endlessly brighter all fantasy coming true
I'm thinking of living inside of your dreams
Running barefoot through nature, you chasing me
End up tripping and falling in love by the sea
We're two eagles that fly, soaring high in the sky
Letting the wind take our bodies, as life passes by
You're a delicate flower, I'm a young honey bee
Sucking your nectar with you encompassing me
Sliding down rainbows after a warm springtime mist
Laughter and giggles when on your cheek I plant my kiss
Your dream will not end having me inside of you
Nights endlessly brighter all fantasy coming true
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Re. Living In Your Dream
Anonymous
16th Feb 2017 00:07am
A very fun, light hearted piece.
Great expression and images.
Nice ink.
Great expression and images.
Nice ink.

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Re. Living In Your Dream
16th Feb 2017 00:20am
Really great piece. My favorite part is:
Sliding down rainbows after a warm springtime mist
Laughter and giggles when on your cheek I plant my kiss
would you mind giving me some feedback on a few of my recent pieces? I'll do the same for you.
Sliding down rainbows after a warm springtime mist
Laughter and giggles when on your cheek I plant my kiss
would you mind giving me some feedback on a few of my recent pieces? I'll do the same for you.
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Re: Re. Living In Your Dream
16th Feb 2017 00:32am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Nov 2018 2:45pm
16th Feb 2017 1:36am
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16th Feb 2017 1:49am
Re. Living In Your Dream
16th Feb 2017 2:03am
I enjoyed this playful, sensitive side of you, Tim. It painted a wonderland of love where two people simply get lost.
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16th Feb 2017 2:14am
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Re. Living In Your Dream
16th Feb 2017 7:29pm
I love that you take it to nature with your words. What a great dream to live in. :)
Willow
Willow
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