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Oh Valentine...
...How it feels to
call you mine
a 'fragrant extraction'
visions in mind...
How sweet the taste
of lips to lips, a grasp
without haste...
To tangle, we entangle
from top to waist
clothin' unwrangled...
Mere seconds it takes
foot to face, each travel
to that place, where
our passions ignite
an all night race
to relish in the harmony
of hearts playin' in honor
of Valentine's Grace...
Published 14th Feb 2017
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This was soooo beautiful baby, I loved it.
Gonna try adding this to my RL :)
Happy Valentine's Day babe :)
Gonna try adding this to my RL :)
Happy Valentine's Day babe :)
14th Feb 2017 10:16am
Aaaaawwwww well gosh n golly gee...u gonna save it for lil ole me?! lol... Thank u babe n I'm happy you loved it, had u not I would've moved to Siberia... Jk...lol I'm not built for that kinda cold lol :) Happy Valentine's Day to you too :)
14th Feb 2017 10:26am
Well neither am I and I'm from California so hell no I would die out there lol.
14th Feb 2017 10:52am
Anonymous
14th Feb 2017 12:07pm
poe this hits that perfect blend
between so damn sweet & sensual
a perfect vday read
xo
between so damn sweet & sensual
a perfect vday read
xo
14th Feb 2017 12:17pm
Aaaaawwww my sweet beautiful Katja, u melt me... :) thank you soooooo much! Truly appreciate you always n Happy Valentines Day to you! :)
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14th Feb 2017 2:58pm
Feels great I'd imagine shame it can't last forever. Beautiful words, beautiful feeling, I'd rather read about it from you :)
15th Feb 2017 10:45am
Thank you my dear, very sweet of you to say that...appreciate the compliment n ur support always :)
14th Feb 2017 3:08pm
15th Feb 2017 10:51am
Dearest Willow, I'm honored by your words n always by your support... hope you had a wonderful V-Day :) thank you. :)
Anonymous
15th Feb 2017 6:31am
Definitely enjoyed reading this on Valentines day.. though I absolutely love this write (great freaking job) is it wrong that I really wanted a twisted poem that reflected the origins of V-day?
15th Feb 2017 10:54am
BL! Missed hearing from you, so welcome back! lol n truly I'm grateful for your time n thoughts... as for a twisted take? Hhhhmmm That sounds to me like a collab. Opportunity! lol... thank you sweetie, appreciate you much! :)
15th Feb 2017 7:13pm
awesome write
enjoyed reading it
and loving this>>>>passions ignite
an all night race << oh yeah
enjoyed reading it
and loving this>>>>passions ignite
an all night race << oh yeah
15th Feb 2017 8:15pm
Wwwwoooewww it's been forever since I last saw u on my page!! Flattered for ur visit... thank u so much, truly appreciate my friend :)
4th Nov 2019 11:01pm
Anonymous
19th Feb 2017 2:42am
Hey Poet......what a sexy sensual night you've shared with us.....enjoyed this ink very much......purple luv & hugs xo :)
3rd Mar 2017 4:40am
12th Mar 2017 12:34pm
Not sure if I've already commented on this but I really liked this ink. Very sweet and full of love and passion. Great work.
12th Mar 2017 1:28pm
Even if you had I'd still be thankful all over again. :) sincerely appreciate you lady :)
