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Estrella Ardiente
The universe has a way of tossing us into the winds of time
and whirling us about like fallen leaves on invisible currents.
We like to belive that we control our own destiny
and chase our fate, sealing it with the descisions we've made
as the world batters us relentlessly with change
and circumstance, but sometimes I wonder.
I wonder why some of us settle in trecherous places,
teatering dangerously on a precipice at the edge of the sea,
waiting for the slightest breeze to send us tumbling
to our breaking point, while others rest comfortably
nestled amidst the protective roots of blossoming fruit trees.
Only destiny determines why
the loneliest souls shine so brightly at night
and once in a thousand lifetimes two are chosen.
Like shooting stars they collide in beautiful catastrophe
A passion that burns away the night - this light of love.
and whirling us about like fallen leaves on invisible currents.
We like to belive that we control our own destiny
and chase our fate, sealing it with the descisions we've made
as the world batters us relentlessly with change
and circumstance, but sometimes I wonder.
I wonder why some of us settle in trecherous places,
teatering dangerously on a precipice at the edge of the sea,
waiting for the slightest breeze to send us tumbling
to our breaking point, while others rest comfortably
nestled amidst the protective roots of blossoming fruit trees.
Only destiny determines why
the loneliest souls shine so brightly at night
and once in a thousand lifetimes two are chosen.
Like shooting stars they collide in beautiful catastrophe
A passion that burns away the night - this light of love.
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Re. Estrella Ardiente
23rd Jan 2017 1:13pm
seeing the brilliance of burning stars, Kas;
to love like that, to burn down the night...
to love like that, to burn down the night...
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23rd Jan 2017 1:26pm
Thank you, John, and yes, lighting up the night with such brilliance that not even the stars can contain it...
Re. Estrella Ardiente
23rd Jan 2017 1:23pm
What a piece of finely woven word-art! I find myself wondering the same thing quite often.
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Re: Re. Estrella Ardiente
24th Jan 2017 8:17am
I guess maybe we all wonder about these things at some point. Thanks for coming to comment, I appreciate the visit...
Re. Estrella Ardiente
23rd Jan 2017 2:26pm
Another one for the gallery, this. Kasai, you have such an amazing heart and astounding gift with words. Beautiful, lovely one. :)
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24th Jan 2017 8:21am
A gallery is such an interesting idea that leaves me wondering if there is such a thing. I would be sure to visit. Thank you, sweet lady, for such kind words and smiles...
Re. Estrella Ardiente
23rd Jan 2017 5:32pm
Life (at least for me) has been a balance. When one great thing enters my life another seems to leave. But I am greatful for any blessing I get for sure. And luckily one of those blessings is one of love 🤗
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Re: Re. Estrella Ardiente
24th Jan 2017 8:24am
I've never really looked at it quite that way, a balancing act of life. Love definately plays a big part, a blessing indeed. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with me...
Re. Estrella Ardiente
23rd Jan 2017 6:49pm
"once in a thousand lifetimes two are chosen.
Like shooting stars they collide in beautiful catastrophe
A passion that burns away the night - this light of love."
ah such a passionate write beautiful Kasai..
love Crim
Like shooting stars they collide in beautiful catastrophe
A passion that burns away the night - this light of love."
ah such a passionate write beautiful Kasai..
love Crim
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24th Jan 2017 8:27am
Re. Estrella Ardiente
24th Jan 2017 1:43am
Exquisite. Kasai. When the two rediscover who they are through each other, a supernova couldn't outshine their love.
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24th Jan 2017 8:31am
Thanks so much, Ahavati, no truer words have ever been spoken. Rediscovery of self through love is a most brilliant and shining thing...
Re. Estrella Ardiente
24th Jan 2017 2:40am
I like ' the loneliest souls shine so brightly at night ' it's a really good meaningful line, and I like how it sounds too....
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24th Jan 2017 8:33am
What a lovely compliment, PR, I'm so glad you came to share with me. Thank you for enjoying...
Re. Estrella Ardiente
24th Jan 2017 11:06am
Wow...goodness, this felt so magical! N that ending? Poetic brilliance! :)
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24th Jan 2017 12:56pm
So glad you enjoyed, and thank you for the great comment and coming to visit me, Pm...
Re. Estrella Ardiente
24th Jan 2017 4:02pm
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25th Jan 2017 1:28am
Re. Estrella Ardiente
25th Jan 2017 1:43am
i think we settle in treacherous places because we dont like to feel to safe because safe is boring. but isnt it strange how we sometimes look for beauty in pain and safety in danger
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Re: Re. Estrella Ardiente
25th Jan 2017 2:45am
Indeed it is, perhaps the pain helps us appreciate the beauty, and the danger, safety. An interesting perspective. Thanks for coming to share your thoughts...
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Re: Re. Estrella Ardiente
26th Jan 2017 8:11am
What an amazingly kind thing to say Melia, so very sweet of you. Many thanks kind lady...