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-bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
You eat my heart
& bitter sweet poison
in shades of night
where I treasure
each terracotta tinted tear
that traced its way across
my knuckle kissed mouth
I've never been afraid
to risk it all between
your toxiferous layers
of alabaster symmetry
permeated with dark days
that linger in far-off places
until dead-eye memories
remind you of how
you've always been the target...
I carry empty promises
where my spine should be
& try to fill the vacuum
with heroin love letters
once-upon-a-never stories
built on frail foundations
just waiting to crumble
and would a promise
have backbone
if lies we told ourselves
had integrity;
would our smiles
not forget their shape
if we never believed
dreams were meant for us...
do you dance when there's no rhythm
burn in the absence of flame
devour your own tongue
without fear of the taste
or do you prefer to be quiet
simply because you've learned
suffocating is more difficult
if you bleed in silence...
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 22nd Jan 2017
| Edited 15th Mar 2017
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Re. -bleed in silence
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2017 12:16pm
just wanna say thank you for writing with me
really stoked with how this turned out :)
your final additions were an unexpected but very welcome surprise
cheers so much again
really stoked with how this turned out :)
your final additions were an unexpected but very welcome surprise
cheers so much again
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Re: Re. -bleed in silence
22nd Jan 2017 12:18pm
Honestly, I have no idea where it came from. Thanks for being an ineffable inspiration as always, love...
Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
Anonymous
22nd Jan 2017 6:26pm
Though looking at this piece from a distance
seems complex, I can assure
that it's everything but.
My, my ... what a reflective use of words
and vivid imagery.
And from the beginning to the end
I was ensnared, partially mesmerized,
partially envious over the concept of love.
This was not only a stunning collab,
but an excellent contrast of words ~
as if walking hand~in~hand
to resonate one with the other,
and to create such a masterpiece.
Good job, Fenom; Good job, Earth_Child,
you both shined;)
~xo, Devlin
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Re: Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
22nd Jan 2017 8:24pm
I'll keep it simple. We were born to write poetry together, end of story... Thanks so much for your kind in-depth words...
Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
22nd Jan 2017 7:49pm
"& try to fill the vacuum
with heroin love letters
once-upon-a-never stories
built on frail foundations
just waiting to crumble"
beautiful one and Ed how I can so relate to these awe inspiring verses..
Brava and Bravo..
love Brenda
with heroin love letters
once-upon-a-never stories
built on frail foundations
just waiting to crumble"
beautiful one and Ed how I can so relate to these awe inspiring verses..
Brava and Bravo..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
22nd Jan 2017 8:25pm
Thanks you. I wrote the second 4th and 5th stanzas in case it was hard to tell...
Re: Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
22nd Jan 2017 8:34pm
Re: Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
5th Feb 2017 1:30am
Thanks so much, Brenda... You've been watching us write together since day one!
Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
23rd Jan 2017 00:55am
Re: Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
23rd Jan 2017 1:42am
Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
23rd Jan 2017 9:10am
The perfect blending of verses, difficult to tell the difference between the two of you. There were so many amazing lines that I couldn't choose a favorite. Beautiful collaberation...
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23rd Jan 2017 1:39pm
Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
Anonymous
24th Jan 2017 1:44am
I love this poem :)
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Re: Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
24th Jan 2017 3:04am
Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
24th Jan 2017 2:34am
Amazing write; I can't distinguish the voices. Just when I think I can, I can't.
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24th Jan 2017 3:04am
Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
25th Jan 2017 8:58am
'once-upon-a-never' is the saddest story of all;
perfectly blended verses that form exquisite poetry...
perfectly blended verses that form exquisite poetry...
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Re: Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
25th Jan 2017 10:23pm
Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
25th Jan 2017 9:30am
This worthy write brought back the words penned by Mark Knopfler, "well now my door was standing open. Security were laid back and lax. But it was only my heart that got broken. You must have had a pass key made out of wax."
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Re: Re. -bleed in silence // Collaboration with (Earth_Child)
25th Jan 2017 10:24pm