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vibes.
i care for you.
always longing to be in your company
when i usually find solace in being alone.
your presence comforts me,
and around you i feel secure.
you feel like home.
i know we've just met,
but i find myself constantly thinking of you,
wondering if you think of me as often.
i know it's not love,
but it could be.
still, if this is just temporary,
the experience was worthwhile.
always longing to be in your company
when i usually find solace in being alone.
your presence comforts me,
and around you i feel secure.
you feel like home.
i know we've just met,
but i find myself constantly thinking of you,
wondering if you think of me as often.
i know it's not love,
but it could be.
still, if this is just temporary,
the experience was worthwhile.
Published 20th Jan 2017
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20th Jan 2017 5:47am
Wow....so poignant and so relateable,. No matter what ages or stages, this can happen to all of us. The irony here is that I have written something quite similar. You have penned a beautiful piece here. Here's the link to my own.....I'd love it if you'd give it a read and implore some comments of your own 🙂
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/260874-the-impulse-and-the-impetus/
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/260874-the-impulse-and-the-impetus/
20th Jan 2017 5:57am
4th Nov 2017 7:22am
This is beautiful love. I can relate.... Thank you for sharing.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
4th Nov 2017 2:52pm
5th Nov 2017 7:15am
This has a very straight forward, delicate and pure vibe that I enjoy feeling.
12th May 2020 7:06pm
13th May 2020 1:55am
I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
