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Hawaii
I'll think of you
while he's
balls deep
inside
my cunt
as his love sears
every word
thats ever been
whispered on the
wind
from lips
to heart
to soul
causing a fracture
within
my memory centre.
while he's
balls deep
inside
my cunt
as his love sears
every word
thats ever been
whispered on the
wind
from lips
to heart
to soul
causing a fracture
within
my memory centre.
Published 10th Jan 2017
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10th Jan 2017 7:35pm
10th Jan 2017 8:28pm
The lummox on top should be dumped as soon as that vacation's over. You think of another, and suffer a searing, fracturing lover with some reluctance. This is a fierce and funny write, Shadow. Fine work and aloha!
10th Jan 2017 11:54pm
11th Jan 2017 7:48am
One is in the mind, and the other is in the, well.. you know 😉
Can't say I haven't been mind penetrated a few times 😁
Great write 🤗
Can't say I haven't been mind penetrated a few times 😁
Great write 🤗
Anonymous
11th Jan 2017 6:52pm
sooner or later i think we all imagine someone else when our eyes are closed. if only once or twice.
a steamy write.
a steamy write.
11th Jan 2017 11:57pm
Something to empathise with though might be better cloaked in the over 18s section
12th Jan 2017 9:45pm
18th Jan 2017 6:52am
R u referring to salad days....am sorry I find it hard to decipher the implicit intense feelings
13th Jan 2018 2:37pm
