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In the Blood
He gazes at the coat of arms
All those talons clutching swords
Sharpened beaks and beady eyes
The symbols of his family name
Emblazoned on a shield
Built to withstand the winds of war
But a trap for souls within
He picks up the family curse
Recalling hairline cracks
Father, mother, sister, brother
Friction, dysfunction and shards of love
Congenital disorders on the rise
In attack formation as he turns gray
He slowly averts his gaze
And feels the remnants of tradition
Mood swings, delusions, booze and drugs
The dismay of crumbling bones
All this and more he acknowledges
Then deems it a day
A doze beneath the coat of arms
But dreams and nightmares do their dance
Until the broken dawn
He wakes up and can't complain
What the hell, it's in the blood.
Artist Jeanette Seebohm
All those talons clutching swords
Sharpened beaks and beady eyes
The symbols of his family name
Emblazoned on a shield
Built to withstand the winds of war
But a trap for souls within
He picks up the family curse
Recalling hairline cracks
Father, mother, sister, brother
Friction, dysfunction and shards of love
Congenital disorders on the rise
In attack formation as he turns gray
He slowly averts his gaze
And feels the remnants of tradition
Mood swings, delusions, booze and drugs
The dismay of crumbling bones
All this and more he acknowledges
Then deems it a day
A doze beneath the coat of arms
But dreams and nightmares do their dance
Until the broken dawn
He wakes up and can't complain
What the hell, it's in the blood.
Artist Jeanette Seebohm
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Re. In the Blood
10th Jan 2017 1:30am
Felt this stinging as it trickled down the page like blood from a fresh paper cut.."Friction, dysfunction and shards of love " really hits close to home...and the ending was a great reminder..you do whats in you..whats come natural ..excellent ink as always Crowfly
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Re: Re. In the Blood
10th Jan 2017 8:32pm
Great comment! Yes, the ending acknowledges the predisposition, and how it's best accepted and not fought. I'm predisposed in various ways and just try to minimize the damage.
Re. In the Blood
10th Jan 2017 2:22am
The songs of metaphors are rather not an easy task to compile.
Nicely structured crowfly.
Nicely structured crowfly.
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10th Jan 2017 8:33pm
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Anonymous
10th Jan 2017 3:56am
Whoa Crow......this stunning ink has made my thoughts deeper than my mind........awesome thought provoking wirte......really enjoyed this......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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10th Jan 2017 8:34pm
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Anonymous
10th Jan 2017 4:38am
Very intense write.
Great expression and imagery...crow style 💓
You never disappoint, my friend.
Great expression and imagery...crow style 💓
You never disappoint, my friend.
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10th Jan 2017 8:38pm
Nor do you Heart. I always enjoy your work. "In the Blood" contains intensity, but that's typical of my family. Drama? Coming right up. Might be best that we're not living under one roof. I still love my sibs, God help them...
Re. In the Blood
10th Jan 2017 9:01am
...i don't want to feel a {ef'in) thing,
yet I get this like nobody's business,
but could really use some booze
tortuous piece my crowfly
-Howlings
yet I get this like nobody's business,
but could really use some booze
tortuous piece my crowfly
-Howlings
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10th Jan 2017 8:40pm
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10th Jan 2017 11:31am
This could be fleshed out into a story:) it leaves me wanting to know more, Crowfly.
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Re: Re. In the Blood
10th Jan 2017 8:41pm
Maybe I'll supply a follow up with my family's further adventures. Thanks Grace!
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Anonymous
10th Jan 2017 5:21pm
i agree with grace,
this leaves me wanting
& yet there is just enough
so i can reach my own conclusion.
you are a masterful writer, Mister
xo
this leaves me wanting
& yet there is just enough
so i can reach my own conclusion.
you are a masterful writer, Mister
xo
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10th Jan 2017 8:44pm
Reaching your own conclusions is the way to go, Koshka. I'd rather guess a little than have things spelled out for me, not giving my brain some wiggle room. Boring! Thanks for the sweet comment...
Re. In the Blood
10th Jan 2017 6:37pm
Sir Crow you really dug deep with this masterpiece..
I can feel your nightmares see them in my mind's eye..
i'm in awe..
love Crim
I can feel your nightmares see them in my mind's eye..
i'm in awe..
love Crim
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10th Jan 2017 8:48pm
Thanks for the praise Crim! You're one of the best here, and I'm honored. Show me your nightmares and I'll show you mine....
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Anonymous
10th Jan 2017 11:30pm
My Lovely Sir Crow, your torment is felt in every line, heard almost in a sarcastically broken tone....it could've gone on for 10 more stanzas and I would have never left....pulls you in like always....so very well done! I love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo
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