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Morning Misery, Laughing Colors
Songs singing into--
Great eternity
Laughing colors
Running endlessly
What light?
Offer me more
Offer me forever
An angel's shade
Of beauty and light
Feathers of forever
Embracing a weary soul
No light is ever dying
In dreams made to look
Ever so exciting
Surrender with splendor
Bleed this empty heart dry
As though it were the sky
Bled free of all its blue
Medicated until death
Like a fun, happy suicide
With smiles and dancers
Candles are fireworks
Bullets birthing butterflies
Until the dawn reawkens
With its wakeful cries.
~anonshadow😏
Note: The line "Angel's shade" Is a reference to one of my older pieces, which on some level inspired this one, though they're different in subject. Thank you for reading.
Great eternity
Laughing colors
Running endlessly
What light?
Offer me more
Offer me forever
An angel's shade
Of beauty and light
Feathers of forever
Embracing a weary soul
No light is ever dying
In dreams made to look
Ever so exciting
Surrender with splendor
Bleed this empty heart dry
As though it were the sky
Bled free of all its blue
Medicated until death
Like a fun, happy suicide
With smiles and dancers
Candles are fireworks
Bullets birthing butterflies
Until the dawn reawkens
With its wakeful cries.
~anonshadow😏
Note: The line "Angel's shade" Is a reference to one of my older pieces, which on some level inspired this one, though they're different in subject. Thank you for reading.
Published 7th Jan 2017
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7th Jan 2017 12:46pm
8th Jan 2017 8:57am
Thank you for your kind words, Grace. Always great to see you around. Glad you enjoyed :)
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
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8th Jan 2017 8:58am
Great way of describing it. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts, Amelia.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
8th Jan 2017 3:19pm
I really enjoyed the juxtaposed misery so associated with morning (by some) against the typical bright colors burning our eyes in light. To some morning is just another day to wake up to despite the beauty of it.
I think you've captured the clearing of after-light perfectly here. Well done.
I think you've captured the clearing of after-light perfectly here. Well done.
9th Jan 2017 3:10am
Thank you, Ahavanti. I agree, morning, while gorgeous can also be terribly miserable. I appreciate your kind words and I am very glad you enjoyed the piece.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
9th Jan 2017 7:19am
Amazing write, however I'm more of a night person so I hate mornings lol
Great job 👍🏼 🙂
Great job 👍🏼 🙂
9th Jan 2017 7:24am
As am I, thus my morning misery, they suck! Lol
Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts, I appreciate you taking the time to do so!
~anonshadow😏
Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts, I appreciate you taking the time to do so!
~anonshadow😏
