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Daddy..!! Am I your whore ?
Scene 1
That was a rainy night of cold whispers
when my thoughts about my daddy raised
like a dead corpse from the grave soils
upon those raised tradition of being fucked
inside the metal man hard and dictum fun
enchanted by the subdued primal fear I got
tried to get some sleep having wet curtains'
my tides of superior infertility laid awoke
my daddy loved me like his new fucking toy
and I never ceased to amaze him with that
that night was never going to end inside me
I needed my daddy with all I had that moment.
Scene 2
I went inside my daddy's room shivering
my mind was overshadowed by lusty eyes
he was sleeping like a kid after baked pies
looked the room with my spooky eyes rolling
I pulled down my pants and started rubbing
I rubbed like a caterpillar inhaling smokes
I put off my panties and made a decision
My daddy loved my naked body of tattoos
I was waiting for my man to wide up his eyes
sudden thuds and sublimed fragnance woke him
spiders began to roll upon my whole body
I saw his eyes upon me and time froze
I shouted with the power of my lusty voice
FUCK ME DADDY with all you have inside
I need some good and delicious empathy tonight.
Scene 3
mouthful of cock and I was restless yet motionless
moaning with the little cunt I was left out with
he was pounding up my hole like a savage on fire
he was unstoppable that day deserving my cunt
finally cums over my face and my daddy was done
My daddy fucked me like a sweet little whore of him
My body got the shore the tides were based upon
my mind got polluted over the watch of almighty
that day I fucked myself with the pain of fire upon
my body told me directions I could work thereafter.
That was a rainy night of cold whispers
when my thoughts about my daddy raised
like a dead corpse from the grave soils
upon those raised tradition of being fucked
inside the metal man hard and dictum fun
enchanted by the subdued primal fear I got
tried to get some sleep having wet curtains'
my tides of superior infertility laid awoke
my daddy loved me like his new fucking toy
and I never ceased to amaze him with that
that night was never going to end inside me
I needed my daddy with all I had that moment.
Scene 2
I went inside my daddy's room shivering
my mind was overshadowed by lusty eyes
he was sleeping like a kid after baked pies
looked the room with my spooky eyes rolling
I pulled down my pants and started rubbing
I rubbed like a caterpillar inhaling smokes
I put off my panties and made a decision
My daddy loved my naked body of tattoos
I was waiting for my man to wide up his eyes
sudden thuds and sublimed fragnance woke him
spiders began to roll upon my whole body
I saw his eyes upon me and time froze
I shouted with the power of my lusty voice
FUCK ME DADDY with all you have inside
I need some good and delicious empathy tonight.
Scene 3
mouthful of cock and I was restless yet motionless
moaning with the little cunt I was left out with
he was pounding up my hole like a savage on fire
he was unstoppable that day deserving my cunt
finally cums over my face and my daddy was done
My daddy fucked me like a sweet little whore of him
My body got the shore the tides were based upon
my mind got polluted over the watch of almighty
that day I fucked myself with the pain of fire upon
my body told me directions I could work thereafter.
Published 5th Jan 2017
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5th Jan 2017 11:39pm
Incest is possibly one of the last remaining taboos, and I'm assuming the "daddy" is not euphemistically applied to a lover but is actually a father. I'd like to know how he answered the titular question. One thing that intrigues me is the contrast between these two lines:
"I need some good and delicious empathy tonight" then
"he was pounding up my hole like a savage on fire."
It seems you were hoping for some tenderness but only got bestial rutting. Daddy must have been piece of work but I'm glad you survived and are here to write about it with such eloquence. I might be off in my comment but I think this is the best I've read by you McJay. Truly fine work!
"I need some good and delicious empathy tonight" then
"he was pounding up my hole like a savage on fire."
It seems you were hoping for some tenderness but only got bestial rutting. Daddy must have been piece of work but I'm glad you survived and are here to write about it with such eloquence. I might be off in my comment but I think this is the best I've read by you McJay. Truly fine work!
6th Jan 2017 3:04am
thanks for the comment crow.
though some questions are never meant to be answered and must be slept inside the solitude of ever binding thoughts and actions.
it happened with me once and I was desperate in this write to get a real touch while writing.Hope you enjoyed my sentiments while I enjoyed the actions.Much love.
though some questions are never meant to be answered and must be slept inside the solitude of ever binding thoughts and actions.
it happened with me once and I was desperate in this write to get a real touch while writing.Hope you enjoyed my sentiments while I enjoyed the actions.Much love.
6th Jan 2017 6:21am
all of the sudden such breakdown over the midst of certain incidents.
Raw and crisp write like a prose form.Loved it.
Raw and crisp write like a prose form.Loved it.
6th Jan 2017 7:48pm
Omg... Guilty as hell to admit but
reading your hunger made me hunger lol... Wow...
reading your hunger made me hunger lol... Wow...
7th Jan 2017 5:50pm
I read this & found no subtlety or shame;
what I found was kinship to classical erotica,
such as 'Autobiography of a Flea' ...
what I found was kinship to classical erotica,
such as 'Autobiography of a Flea' ...
Great ink! related with me story. I have very beautiful half Indian and African daughter and since she was in 5 years I started to take care of her as her mother passed away by car accident. I love my daughter so much no more as my daughter and i could not think if I could have fucked her one day due to our African culture but happened the same as you did to your father and she came to my room and begged me to fuck her . I was reluctant do it at first as I got big cock and thinking she can't manage me as she is only 18 years. But I have decided to fuck her to my biggest surprising she was able to manage my cock and told me she enjoyed more anal sex, me too I have enjoyed both her pussy and ass. Oh, my God we keep on doing this every night now. Thanks for sharing erotic story to us her at DU
