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Axon
sitting right besides these lifeless clouds
again inside dilemma,
to get washed.
However insanity lacks virtue completely
doing against habits,
from the past.
nothing makes me a purging pure compiler
right besides intimacy,
humble old deeds.
perfect in the sense of gulf of new sorrow
beneath those fights,
when life was.
again inside dilemma,
to get washed.
However insanity lacks virtue completely
doing against habits,
from the past.
nothing makes me a purging pure compiler
right besides intimacy,
humble old deeds.
perfect in the sense of gulf of new sorrow
beneath those fights,
when life was.
Published 7th Jan 2017
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7th Jan 2017 7:02pm
woah.. i think this may be deeper than my fried brain can handle :P thanks for sharing this!!
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Anonymous
7th Jan 2017 7:20pm
i adore your syntax
it makes for fearless poetry
xo
it makes for fearless poetry
xo
7th Jan 2017 7:29pm
best in the sense of the way it has been put on the paper.
always a great write from you mcjay.
always a great write from you mcjay.
8th Jan 2017 11:52am
9th Jan 2017 11:06pm
Fine work, McJay. I particularly relate to these lines:
However insanity lacks virtue completely
doing against habits,
from the past.
My own madness involves persistent habits and haunted thoughts. Just wish they were all in the past...
However insanity lacks virtue completely
doing against habits,
from the past.
My own madness involves persistent habits and haunted thoughts. Just wish they were all in the past...
7th Aug 2017 1:56pm
i love the last two stanzas of this piece,great imagery turned. well penned and keep'em coming mcjay.
