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Mindless Sheep
I can't eat but I can drink
I can cry but I can't think
I want to die, but my luck stinks
I once tried, but I hit a kink
Now I can't, I've gone too deep
Too much commitment, so I weep
And long for when I reach eternal sleep
Until then I'll be a mindless sheep
Producing my wool for others to keep
Judged by my surface, although I'm deep
Life is hard, but drugs are cheap
If you're acquainted with the right creep
I can cry but I can't think
I want to die, but my luck stinks
I once tried, but I hit a kink
Now I can't, I've gone too deep
Too much commitment, so I weep
And long for when I reach eternal sleep
Until then I'll be a mindless sheep
Producing my wool for others to keep
Judged by my surface, although I'm deep
Life is hard, but drugs are cheap
If you're acquainted with the right creep
Published 3rd Jan 2017
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5th Jan 2017 6:40pm
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7th Jan 2017 4:45pm
"Life is hard, but drugs are cheap
If you're acquainted with the right creep"
preach!
Welcome to DU! I look forward to seeing what else ya post.
<3
If you're acquainted with the right creep"
preach!
Welcome to DU! I look forward to seeing what else ya post.
<3
3rd Feb 2017 12:09pm
"Until then I'll be a mindless sheep
Producing my wool for others to keep"
This is my favorite line, it can be interpreted so many ways. To me it feels like the draining cycle of trying to make other people happy. Like as soon as you become full and happy, someone is right behind you ready to shear you naked again. Damn I feel that, good write.
Producing my wool for others to keep"
This is my favorite line, it can be interpreted so many ways. To me it feels like the draining cycle of trying to make other people happy. Like as soon as you become full and happy, someone is right behind you ready to shear you naked again. Damn I feel that, good write.
20th Jan 2021 1:49am
