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Agony
Each word is as splinters
under my fingernails
words of love
once mine
are like claws ripping
into my heart
Your tears were as acid
mine meant nothing
no...not to you
just wistful thoughts
on dark lonely nights
agony...I want it to end
soon. Please.
*this poem was entered in a competition. thank you for reading*
Published 27th Dec 2016
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27th Dec 2016 5:12am
So much pain to have but to be amplified by ignoration of someone close, so selfish in their own pain while hypocrisy rules their heart... agony indeed!
JJ
JJ
27th Dec 2016 8:53am
It is:) for some people, when things are going their way, those who stood with them in sorrow are forgotten. This poem is just for the comp, though. No worries.:) Poetryman.
27th Dec 2016 6:27am
A deep and painful piece of poetry, simply fantastic, Grace.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
27th Dec 2016 8:54am
Oh have mercy Grace!!! How I know this well.......my life became disfucntional over feeling this in my life at a time.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
28th Dec 2016 10:30am
My dear Flowergirl...so sad for you...for us. Thank you for reading and commenting.
29th Dec 2016 7:59pm
Words of love are pain to those listening and remembering how they once had personal relevance. Overhearing can be torture. Fine work Grace! This one hits a nerve....
29th Dec 2016 8:11pm
There you go.😀 Crowfly. But this one was written according to a competition. It's fiction...Thank you for reading me as always.
