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good news, bad news
the good news
im willing to cope with
my knee
and deal with the pain
not as bad as it use to be
the bad news
my prescription
is expired
im willing to cope with
my knee
and deal with the pain
not as bad as it use to be
the bad news
my prescription
is expired
Published 3rd Dec 2009
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4th Dec 2009 4:15pm
i love the simplicity to it and yet how complex one can make of it
the message is concrete, and i personally like how you end it by stating "my prescription is expired" it just gives a very definite tone to it
the message is concrete, and i personally like how you end it by stating "my prescription is expired" it just gives a very definite tone to it
4th Dec 2009 4:18pm
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