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The Ravenous
There's a pool of ectoplasm
On the bedroom floor
It seems a ghost had an orgasm
Courtesy of lost Lenore
I cannot sit and brood
When Lenore learns to come
Now she is always in the mood
No earthly reason to be glum
The raven cannot help but stare
His commentary terse
Lost Lenore is comely bare
And his feathers are a curse
Nevermore to weep
As I lead Lenore to bed
I will relinquish sleep
My lady's touch will raise the dead.
John Cusack in "The Raven"
On the bedroom floor
It seems a ghost had an orgasm
Courtesy of lost Lenore
I cannot sit and brood
When Lenore learns to come
Now she is always in the mood
No earthly reason to be glum
The raven cannot help but stare
His commentary terse
Lost Lenore is comely bare
And his feathers are a curse
Nevermore to weep
As I lead Lenore to bed
I will relinquish sleep
My lady's touch will raise the dead.
John Cusack in "The Raven"
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Re. The Ravenous
Anonymous
12th Dec 2016 8:06pm
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15th Dec 2016 1:09am
Re. The Ravenous
Anonymous
12th Dec 2016 9:39pm
This. *** blushing and grinning for certain **
Only you can deliver such an erotic piece.
That mind of yours is quite delicious.
Nice erotic write, my friend 💓
Only you can deliver such an erotic piece.
That mind of yours is quite delicious.
Nice erotic write, my friend 💓
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15th Dec 2016 1:08am
Re. The Ravenous
Anonymous
13th Dec 2016 2:31am
Lovely Sir Crow...so glad to see you in my updates! You deliver like no one else...without "seeing" it was you, I would have known! Excellent! I love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo
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15th Dec 2016 1:13am
Thanks Taryn! I'm delighted you can recognize me by style since I'm not terribly consistent with my themes and topics. I'm honored to be among your updates!
Re. The Ravenous
13th Dec 2016 2:49am
That's one of the best poem you have written, Crowfly.:) The dead will awaken for sure...and die its little death with every touch. Brilliant.
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15th Dec 2016 1:15am
Re. The Ravenous
13th Dec 2016 4:18pm
Sir Crow imagining the lovely Lenore bare of her feathers so subtly erotic in a dark way love it ;)
love Crim
love Crim
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15th Dec 2016 1:19am
I understand Lenore has taken up modeling for Playboy.:) Maybe the raven could be her manager, or the crowfly better yet. Thank you Crim!
Re. The Ravenous
14th Dec 2016 3:26am
Re: Re. The Ravenous
15th Dec 2016 1:20am
Your mind is pure kink for me ;)
7th Jan 2017 7:20pm
Hmmm, now I am just
jaw dropped here. And
my mind is too graphic
for this.
Oh wow, maybe my
name can be Lenoire?
lol, I had to entwine it,
just could'nt resist the
urge..
As always, a pleasure
-Noire
jaw dropped here. And
my mind is too graphic
for this.
Oh wow, maybe my
name can be Lenoire?
lol, I had to entwine it,
just could'nt resist the
urge..
As always, a pleasure
-Noire
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27th Jul 2017 9:51pm