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Your Gaze
Lost in the portal of your gaze,
Taken far away from This place
To another space, out of phase,
Lost in the portal of your gaze,
Amazed by your mystical ways,
A power that time won’t erase
Lost in the portal of your gaze,
Taken far away from This place
Published 9th Aug 2011
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Thanks to Mr. Jack Heslop (Hesslopian) for introducing us
to the classical poetic style of the triolet.
This short eight line style has really helped me
to stress brevity and get the most out of a few words.
Thanks Jack. You are a true poet
to the classical poetic style of the triolet.
This short eight line style has really helped me
to stress brevity and get the most out of a few words.
Thanks Jack. You are a true poet
