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He only writes when he's unhappy
He only writes when he's unhappy
I'm not sure what that means
Only when he's low
His words seem to flow
Feeling down, he leans on others
Hiding beneath the covers
When he's winning
No one hears from him
Highs or lows
Never really there for anyone
Need to lean on him?
and for sure he's gone
Wallowing in self pitty
He likes to do drugs
and he's a bit of a drinker
Maybe that's his inspo
It brings out the thinker
Anyway
She's done trying to help him
Until he needs her again
and she'll go out on a limb
Reliving the same old pain...
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Female_confessions
Published 30th Nov 2016
| Edited 6th Jan 2017
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Re. He only writes when he's happy
30th Nov 2016 1:22pm
Re: Re. He only writes when he's happy
30th Nov 2016 1:29pm
Thanks for reading. Glad you gained some kind of insight to this write... hopefully positively if negative then *Hugs go out to you
Re. He only writes when he's unhappy
30th Nov 2016 8:54pm
Darkness is huge source for writers, for me it's always easier to write what I feel or am currently going through at that moment. When im feeling good I barely find the words. This is a sad write but good
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Re: Re. He only writes when he's unhappy
30th Nov 2016 9:32pm
Hi you are so right and I think a lot of us can relate to this one. Glad you found it a good write and thanks for stopping by to read :)
Re. He only writes when he's unhappy
30th Nov 2016 9:29pm
Fascinating subject matter. I can relate. For so many years, I'd only write if I was down. I was aware of it, but didn't care for it. I've, since, learned to gather inspiration from a variety of sources.
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Re: Re. He only writes when he's unhappy
30th Nov 2016 9:39pm
I totally get that though Chaoticwayz I'm like it myself but I'm trying to think of happier writes but the sad ones just come so naturally... I will say though it's funny really because I'm starting to look at the world in a different light noticing a lot more than usual and at the same time trying not to forget to appreciate others. Thanks for reading 😘
Re: Re. He only writes when he's unhappy
30th Nov 2016 10:00pm
Re: Re. He only writes when he's unhappy
30th Nov 2016 10:24pm
Re. He only writes when he's unhappy
12th Dec 2016 3:52pm
Re. He only writes when he's unhappy
23rd Jan 2017 7:29am
I loved the write. It kind of reminded me of a younger me. I had trouble writing more than just unhappy 😁 But I'm a bit more upbeat.
Some people's pain never goes away. They tend to bring others down because of that.
Awesomeness 🤗
Some people's pain never goes away. They tend to bring others down because of that.
Awesomeness 🤗
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Re: Re. He only writes when he's unhappy
23rd Jan 2017 4:09pm
Thanks for the comment and the rl entry DC ☺ Yeah it can be difficult especially when you write what you feel glad you're a bit more upbeat I love your work regardless of its mood 😉 FC 💜
Re: Re. He only writes when he's unhappy
23rd Jan 2017 7:25pm