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Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
So much in the way of 'gifts'
Talent it's said merely this
"Potential..." To embrace, n'
hone it, mold it, into bein'
somethin' unusual this
sight unseen...
Thanks for the love
of family, children,
n' so many friends
those that love one
another n' hold on
til the very end...
Thanks for air, trees,
water, n' sky, all this
natural beauty that
enchants my eye...
N' although they're
strangers amongst
the varied writers
n' readers on the DU...
for whatever, n' whom
cashed in their time
n' thoughts to give
support, I'm truly
thankful to everyone
of you!!
Talent it's said merely this
"Potential..." To embrace, n'
hone it, mold it, into bein'
somethin' unusual this
sight unseen...
Thanks for the love
of family, children,
n' so many friends
those that love one
another n' hold on
til the very end...
Thanks for air, trees,
water, n' sky, all this
natural beauty that
enchants my eye...
N' although they're
strangers amongst
the varied writers
n' readers on the DU...
for whatever, n' whom
cashed in their time
n' thoughts to give
support, I'm truly
thankful to everyone
of you!!
Written by
Poetikmind
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Published 24th Nov 2016
| Edited 25th Nov 2016
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Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
24th Nov 2016 5:18pm
A beautiful tribute to your friends among artists on DU! Happy Thanksgiving to you!
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Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
24th Nov 2016 5:32pm
Thank you my sweetheart, u must know U are definitely among them!
Truly appreciate you always... :)
N happy turkey day to u n ur family :)
Truly appreciate you always... :)
N happy turkey day to u n ur family :)
Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
Anonymous
24th Nov 2016 8:35pm
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Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
24th Nov 2016 8:55pm
Yes it is indeed bro! Thank you
for your continued support I truly appreciate it.
for your continued support I truly appreciate it.
Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
24th Nov 2016 9:28pm
Awh this is the sweetest thing eva
You're the kindest type of polite :p
Nice dedication.
You're the kindest type of polite :p
Nice dedication.
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Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
25th Nov 2016 7:59am
Aaaawww thank you sweetness... I'm truly flattered n grateful to
know you liked my ink offering. :)
know you liked my ink offering. :)
Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
Anonymous
25th Nov 2016 3:52am
PM!! A beautiful tribute to all the gifts which surround us, seen and unseen...I appreciate you and I am thankful I can call you a friend!
With love - Taryn xoxo
With love - Taryn xoxo
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Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
25th Nov 2016 8:21am
Sweetheart I too am thankful for the same... Truly appreciate your support as well always! hope turkey day was a good one! :)
Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
25th Nov 2016 5:34am
We don't have Thanksgiving, but let me join in by saying: Thank you for the love and for this wonderful poem :-)
A great way to start my morning!
A great way to start my morning!
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Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
25th Nov 2016 8:23am
Aaawww... Well I'll save u a plate anyways! lol but yea I thank you for giving me another big ole smile! lol
Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
25th Nov 2016 8:30am
Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
25th Nov 2016 6:15pm
Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
25th Nov 2016 6:50pm
Great style!!
This one is fun to read, for sure!
As for honest critique, I'd say; change, "It's" to "it"
"Talent it's is said merely this"
Kudos on the ink! Quite enchanting!
This one is fun to read, for sure!
As for honest critique, I'd say; change, "It's" to "it"
"Talent it's is said merely this"
Kudos on the ink! Quite enchanting!
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Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
25th Nov 2016 7:47pm
Wow lol honestly didn't realize I wrote it's n is together lol thanks for the catch dude n thanks for the kind response to my ink. Truly appreciate it :)
Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
26th Nov 2016 4:33am
Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
26th Nov 2016 8:38am
yes this is a gift and it's been a gift - how remarkable it all is - God bless
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Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
26th Nov 2016 10:40am
Tru Dat... N I agree... Thank you
my friend, appreciate the support as always :)
my friend, appreciate the support as always :)
Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
Anonymous
1st Dec 2016 8:05pm
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Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
1st Dec 2016 8:15pm
Thanks so much dude, I'm truly grateful for your time n thoughts on my ink...
Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
11th Feb 2017 1:49pm
Re: Re. Dear Lord Thanks, for Givin...'
11th Feb 2017 2:53pm
Thank you for your amazing comment! Truly n greatly appreciate your support my friend :)