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Signátum In Lapidem
(Written for the "Beneath The Ashes"competition)
Oh deafening roar
run my child I soon will foll…
Madonna in ash
Gaea what was done
that thy wrath be enkindled?
petrified pleading
Oh deafening roar
run my child I soon will foll…
Madonna in ash
Gaea what was done
that thy wrath be enkindled?
petrified pleading
Published 22nd Nov 2016
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22nd Nov 2016 2:25pm
There's something so beckoningly urgent, yet historically nostalgic about this, Gahddess.
22nd Nov 2016 4:50pm
Thank you Ahavati. I thought the topic lent so well to the Haiku structure because there was so little time to recognize the danger and react.
23rd Nov 2016 2:36pm
You've imbued this write with an absolute desperation of a scream. It's a remarkable piece! Thank you so much for entering it and sharing! :)
Willow
Willow
23rd Nov 2016 8:38pm
Thank you Willow! I tried to channel the desperation and helplessness of a parent.
24th Nov 2016 11:05am
To know that you have read and we're touched by my work gives greater purpose to my every heart beat. It's good to have you visit.
29th Nov 2016 9:25am
this touched on a very personal plane, for me at least.
Power'filled
-Howlings
PS: question? how did you get your font so small?
Power'filled
-Howlings
PS: question? how did you get your font so small?
29th Nov 2016 6:27pm
Thank you Howlings! I am very much gratified that this piece touched you on a personal level. For my Haiku/Senryu I sometimes use the font size feature i.e. . I noticed that sometimes that command doesn't work with all fonts.
29th Nov 2016 6:27pm
Thank you Howlings! I am very much gratified that this piece touched you on a personal level. For my Haiku/Senryu I sometimes use the font size feature i.e. . I noticed that sometimes that command doesn't work with all fonts.
