sweet sin

Brutal
Lovely

thank you kindly Sir..

love Crimsin

My Beautiful Brenda.....always beautiful, always fierce...this ink gave me the chills in its visuals...

"wallow the razors I spit
they slice and cut as they go down

thoughts like acid
burn my skin
as I face the mirror

see the monster I can be
sweet sin
cotton candy wrapped switchblade"
~ epic lines lovely one....in love with them as I am also with you

xoxo Taryn

thank you beautiful one for the love you've shown me on this write..

I love you so much :)

xo Brenda

I will never quite look at cotton candy the same again. You've woven a staggering tapestry here. I can never see you the way your words would have me believe. You're too beautiful inside for me to see it. And you never disappoint with your writing.
Willow

thank you lovely Willow for seeing only the light in me though I have a great amount of darkness lurking here as well..

love Brenda

But there is beauty in the dark...  :)

Purely diabolical. You prove the devil was the most beautiful of angels.

aw thank you Darkest Lord :)

love Crim

Oh boy, this is you for sure, Brenda. It also fits to a T someone I know. Yesss! . . .

"see the monster I can be
sweet sin
cotton candy wrapped switchblade"

Again, yesss!

thank you Jerry..

yes this fits that dark, angry side of me too I think..

deeply appreciate you..

love Brenda

Wowzers Crim......precious when your ink is in fire......luving this.......right down wicked.......purple luv & hugs xo :)

thank you most kindly lovely Flower..

love Crim

thank you kindly Adam :)

love Brenda

I love this piece so much. The imagery is strong, bold and dark all at the same time. I especially love the last two stanzas/verses. A good write.

I'm the devil
corrupt from the inside out
where I go demons follow

see the monster I can be
sweet sin
cotton candy wrapped switchblade

thank you graciously Eswaller..

love Crim

thank you lovely Amelia yes sigh my tongue gets the better of me at times..

love Crim

Sweet sin is so alluring 😁

Wonderful 🤗

thank you DC :)

love Crim

The way you lay bare your darkest colors is simply beautiful, Crim,

'see the monster I can be
sweet sin
cotton candy wrapped switchblade'

thank you lovely Kasai..

love Crim

Was thinking about knives as I read this

Last line is your opus here

Hardcore Brenda

Like

aw thank you Poet on the same wavelength ;)

love Brenda

poisonous poetry, Crim,
venom hidden by the cotton candy,
but it puts me in a circus mood...

thank you John for the giggle :)

love Crim

First off: I was fascinated by the picture... I kept staring at it before reading your poem!    
   
The poem exceeded my expectations though I should know by now that you never dissapoint ;-)    
   
It's dark, it's strong, it's you! I really like the repetitions... it suits the poem perfectly (as does the picture) Great ink, dear Crim!    
   
Love, Duende

thank you lovely Duende the picture was tricky business finding but when I saw this one I thought it perfect for the poem.. so pleased you enjoyed the write :)

love Crim

Cotton candy wrapped switchblade is a perfect description of sin, Brenda. Because it does present itself as something sticky sweet that we can barely resist. It only reveals itself once we've taken a bite. It sours in our mouths before we can spit it out. Words words words, as much as I love them in poetry, I can do without them in dialogue. You simply can't take them back once they're been uttered, can you? But you can choose to understand the contrast of human experience that makes us so appreciate the authentic expressions of genuine caring and Love.

xo

thank you dearest Sage One for the wisdom in your comment.. that's exactly what this poem is about spitting ugly words which once uttered can't be taken back it is indeed like poison to those that hear them and can be spread like a disease.. I really need to get a leash on my tongue.. I deeply appreciate your insight on this write..  
 
love Brenda

Holy shit!! "Cotton candy wrapped switchblade..." That's a chilling image for sure!

aw thank you dearest Poe :)

love Crim

Vivid, not bad.

thank you :)

love Crim

This is demonic but delightful, the blade being offered with spun sugar.

I'm the devil
corrupt from the inside out
where I go demons follow

see the monster I can be
sweet sin
cotton candy wrapped switchblade

A monster with sweetly concealed weaponry.  They'll never see it coming Crim.

thank you Sir Crow for showing love to this darkened write..

love Crim

Brenda.. this is simply brilliant.. only you could weave such words.. i'm such a fan.. love you!!




Dave

thank you my brother Dave :)

love Brenda

That damn picture!
my ladyloves, ahh you smite me

i'm speechless here,


-Howlings

thank you beautiful Howlings..

love Crim