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"SUCK..." 2
...This thick dick, whipped out
anxiously awaits her pouty
mouth-puckered, yet ready
hold head steady, aim...
Fire...rapid 'suck-satin' I desire
her tongue, relatin' sensations
swhirlin' around the head
vaccuum suction, deep
throat, increased stroke...
She's my angel, I poke
choke her sweetly, her pleasure
to feed pon me, til explosive
hot creamy cum, coats her
as eruption empties in a blur
fallin' to rest, within her tummy...
anxiously awaits her pouty
mouth-puckered, yet ready
hold head steady, aim...
Fire...rapid 'suck-satin' I desire
her tongue, relatin' sensations
swhirlin' around the head
vaccuum suction, deep
throat, increased stroke...
She's my angel, I poke
choke her sweetly, her pleasure
to feed pon me, til explosive
hot creamy cum, coats her
as eruption empties in a blur
fallin' to rest, within her tummy...
Published 20th Nov 2016
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20th Nov 2016 3:30am
20th Nov 2016 3:39am
Uhm...yea lol but the sweetness of you warms me lol... Thank you my dear lady, truly honored n appreciated :)
Anonymous
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20th Nov 2016 4:29am
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20th Nov 2016 7:57am
Lol I'm so happy I didn't insult u then! lol truly grateful for you n all your support sweetness :)
20th Nov 2016 12:10pm
20th Nov 2016 1:36pm
Thanks bro. Just trying to do my part to help ' inspire' the women for us guys! lol
20th Nov 2016 1:18pm
Loving the visual painted by your words. Nothing wrong with a mind blowing "suck" every now and then. 😆💋💋💋
20th Nov 2016 1:55pm
Absolutely agree! lol thank you my
sweet hottness, deeply appreciate you always :)
sweet hottness, deeply appreciate you always :)
20th Nov 2016 1:27pm
Awesome :-D
I poke
choke her sweetly > this line made me smile (as well as the last one)
Great ink, dear Poetik!
I poke
choke her sweetly > this line made me smile (as well as the last one)
Great ink, dear Poetik!
20th Nov 2016 2:01pm
Nothing wrong with a lil smilin' when you enjoyed yourself! lol...thank you sweetheart :)
Anonymous
20th Nov 2016 4:30pm
You are lethal with a pen! Oooh, I gotta run after that one! 😉
Willow
Willow
23rd Nov 2016 7:52am
Lol u gotta run? Aaaawwww... Thank you my sweetie, appreciate the "comment n run" thingy! lol
Anonymous
22nd Nov 2016 2:40am
Yummy yummy in my tummy......oh how sweet it is too swallow your yummy cummy......LOL!! I couldn't resist messing with you Poet.......luved this sexy romp....purple luv & hugs xo :)
22nd Nov 2016 3:31am
Omg... Don't mess around with me about enjoying my crummy woman! I'd want that for real lol... Thank u sweetest flower :)
23rd Nov 2016 5:16am
"eruption empties in a blur" love that line.. This was all kinds of Hot and Spicy..i truly enjoyed
23rd Nov 2016 7:55am
My my my... The poetic one has returned! lol thank you my dear, I'm grateful as always for the support
n I love that you're clearly a fan of 'hot n spicy!' lol
n I love that you're clearly a fan of 'hot n spicy!' lol
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