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'Imagination, is Funny...'
He found her...
Nestled, sweetly in a poem
right along the creases
of 'out there' he roamed...
Like twilight, he zoned
among the stars, galaxies
far, far, away from home...
He lifted her, a gift of light
a cullin' unto a sole's flight
unbound by the syncretism
of whole of half day to night...
He urged her semblance, bond
she was the extra-in-ordinary
he tripped upon...though
as with 'fancy' passin'
bye, she was gone...
He found her
neatly, completely
like a dream played out
perfectly, so sweetly...
in a poem...
Nestled, sweetly in a poem
right along the creases
of 'out there' he roamed...
Like twilight, he zoned
among the stars, galaxies
far, far, away from home...
He lifted her, a gift of light
a cullin' unto a sole's flight
unbound by the syncretism
of whole of half day to night...
He urged her semblance, bond
she was the extra-in-ordinary
he tripped upon...though
as with 'fancy' passin'
bye, she was gone...
He found her
neatly, completely
like a dream played out
perfectly, so sweetly...
in a poem...
Published 10th Nov 2016
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10th Nov 2016 12:35pm
Indeed, imagination is funny...you find beauty in the most mundane, like a flower or a word:) beautifully shared Poetik.
10th Nov 2016 1:23pm
10th Nov 2016 2:14pm
Oh my, Poetik... I think this is my favorite of yours so far!
Such a beautiful poem... the sound... the rhyme... perfection!
Such a beautiful poem... the sound... the rhyme... perfection!
10th Nov 2016 2:38pm
*big time blushing* aaaawwww thank you my dear! I'm flattered so much n I thank you bunches for your sweet words n support :)
Anonymous
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10th Nov 2016 2:41pm
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10th Nov 2016 3:26pm
Gosh...you my sweet one just made
me cheese like that 'koolaid' smile! lol I graciously thank you my dear
always for your support :)
me cheese like that 'koolaid' smile! lol I graciously thank you my dear
always for your support :)
Anonymous
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10th Nov 2016 5:14pm
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10th Nov 2016 5:45pm
Anonymous
10th Nov 2016 2:43pm
"He found her...
Nestled, sweetly in a poem
right along the creases "
talk about poetic quicksand...
ha...we the reader had no chance
after that opening line
"the extra-in-ordinary"
this gem grabs with many tentacles
bro!!!
Nestled, sweetly in a poem
right along the creases "
talk about poetic quicksand...
ha...we the reader had no chance
after that opening line
"the extra-in-ordinary"
this gem grabs with many tentacles
bro!!!
10th Nov 2016 3:30pm
Thank you bro. Truly always an honor
to get a visit from you! N the list add was a bonus :)
to get a visit from you! N the list add was a bonus :)
10th Nov 2016 2:54pm
You have spread such beautiful eloquence feelings that many of us have felt ourselves. So perfect, this one. I am in love with this piece. :)
Willow
Willow
10th Nov 2016 3:59pm
I love that you are in love with this piece! Such a honor... Thank you my sweet lady :)
Anonymous
10th Nov 2016 2:59pm
I wasn't quite sure where this poem was taking me and then i smiled when i got to the end. A satisfied smile, which tells me how cleverly you've weaved with beauty, romance and every poet's muse, alive within the pen. Nicely done PIKM, my first read of the day and its perfect.
10th Nov 2016 3:44pm
Anonymous
10th Nov 2016 3:10pm
Hey Poet......how beautiful are the words that we find in a heart that inks luv so naturally........when the words we connect to and feel within ourselves.......enjoyed this inspirational ink.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
10th Nov 2016 4:08pm
Well to inspire, is always something I hope to do, so that alone is a huge compliment... To get hugs n kisses too!? Wow lord take me now! lol thank u sweet flower :)
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Nov 2016 3:38pm
10th Nov 2016 3:21pm
You have no idea, what you've
just done. ah, in the crevices,
you touched me so so much
i totally got you, and thanks for
the uplifting wake-up signal
damn it ,
just done. ah, in the crevices,
you touched me so so much
i totally got you, and thanks for
the uplifting wake-up signal
damn it ,
10th Nov 2016 4:10pm
Hhhhmmmm... If I were to guess...lol
So honored this 'woke' you my dearest lady, truly grateful for you n your support always :)
So honored this 'woke' you my dearest lady, truly grateful for you n your support always :)
10th Nov 2016 5:30pm
"He found her
neatly, completely
like a dream played out
perfectly, so sweetly...
in a poem..."
Short and sweet, but more than that....it was perfect. Thank you for putting a smile on my face this morning! Moving words and beautiful ink love.
neatly, completely
like a dream played out
perfectly, so sweetly...
in a poem..."
Short and sweet, but more than that....it was perfect. Thank you for putting a smile on my face this morning! Moving words and beautiful ink love.
10th Nov 2016 5:47pm
Aaaawww really?? I'm honored to have done that! :) thank you my sweet beauty, sincerely grateful for you :)
15th Nov 2016 1:27am
I imagine...your imagination has danced you into all sorts of mischief over the years. You and She hit the stage beautifully together :)
15th Nov 2016 8:19am
There is no "she" in this... That's exactly why it's called imagination lol
BUT I appreciate your words my sweetness. Thank you always :)
BUT I appreciate your words my sweetness. Thank you always :)
15th Nov 2016 8:53am
apologies PM for personifying your imagination and my muddling my intent, LR :)
16th Nov 2016 11:02am
"He found her
neatly, completely
like a dream played out
perfectly, so sweetly...
in a poem..."
And you took my breath away, PM!
neatly, completely
like a dream played out
perfectly, so sweetly...
in a poem..."
And you took my breath away, PM!
16th Nov 2016 11:15pm
Aaaawww my sweetness! Thank you for your wonderful praise, I'm grateful as always :)
17th Nov 2016 3:51pm
18th Nov 2016 1:20am
18th Nov 2016 1:34am
haha! yeah, I'm feeling this burn like 1st degree.
EXACTLY, what I'm missing, you make this man wanna
get on his knees and tell his woman:
please come back, quit hiding in the crevices of your
poems, ha!
You have superior penmanship dude.
EXACTLY, what I'm missing, you make this man wanna
get on his knees and tell his woman:
please come back, quit hiding in the crevices of your
poems, ha!
You have superior penmanship dude.
18th Nov 2016 1:55am
As bro. You're far too kind, but I'm deeply flattered n honored by your words n support.
N Yea go git that woman! lol
N Yea go git that woman! lol
18th Nov 2016 11:33pm
"He found her...
Nestled, sweetly in a poem
right along the creases
of 'out there' he roamed... "
A vivid stanza.
Nestled, sweetly in a poem
right along the creases
of 'out there' he roamed... "
A vivid stanza.
18th Nov 2016 11:37pm
19th Nov 2016 10:00pm
I'm so loving this.. .
..extremely intense
for me
that's it.. that's all
gosh
-Howlings
..extremely intense
for me
that's it.. that's all
gosh
-Howlings
15th Dec 2016 10:08am
You had me from beginning to end and left me craving more....:)
Words so beautifully weaved and intertwined. As a reader, it "rings" like the beautiful sound of an orchestra...from beginning to end....
Outstandingly perfect job, "Maestro"....:)
Words so beautifully weaved and intertwined. As a reader, it "rings" like the beautiful sound of an orchestra...from beginning to end....
Outstandingly perfect job, "Maestro"....:)
16th Dec 2016 5:57pm
WOW... You words were so beautiful to me... Thanking you with all my heart. :)
13th Jan 2017 7:28pm
Showing some almighty skills here.. I would highlight a particular stanza but I like them all as much as the last, beautiful and delicate :)
13th Jan 2017 7:46pm
Dagg...your comment is so wonderful, I feel like I'm cheating u by just sayin thank you lol... Sincerely, I'm honored...
