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A Vision
her pleasing to the eye form
overshadowed only
by her charming face and smile
its as if
she was born
inside a super organic
milky way
she truly has what it takes
she is not narcissistic
the woman whom I believe to be immortal
born again and again and . . .
yet again
is someone who projects a rocking goodtime
a goddess giving me
an earthling
a taste of her very grande presence
given to me from her soft hazel eyes
there are countless
heavenly stars
in her smile which can light up the universe
when she bestows it on you
your heat can’t keep
up with itself
©September 25, 2016 / Jerry Pat Bolton
Published 18th Nov 2016
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Anonymous
18th Nov 2016 3:14am
Wow Jerry......a beautiful tribute to a fortunate Lady who has captured a look from your heart.......brilliant....enjoyed......purple luv & hugs xo :)
18th Nov 2016 4:40am
18th Nov 2016 4:29am
dazzling write Jerry an enchanting lady you've described here in brilliant detail..
count me utterly seduced..
love Brenda
count me utterly seduced..
love Brenda
18th Nov 2016 4:41am
Yes, Brenda she was lovely, but times have changed, I know you understand. Thank you for being here.
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18th Nov 2016 2:02pm
Thanks Overly for your very nice comments on my poem, I so appreciate it.
Anonymous
18th Nov 2016 5:40pm
Jerry this is enchanting...in every aspect...from the first line to the last and the pic.....well that brings it all together perfectly!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
18th Nov 2016 7:18pm
Ah, what a sweet response to my poem Taryn. Your thoughts had me smiling, and that's a good thing. Thank you.
18th Nov 2016 8:19pm
I think I love your adorational tributes to women the most, Jerry. They contain a regal quality that's unsubmissive yet respectful in nature. Some of this imagery is beautiful indeed.
18th Nov 2016 10:23pm
Oh my Ahavati, you have brought a huge smile on my face as I read your comments. I so admire women, all types of them, and I am so happy you gave me a pat on the back with your comments. Thank you.
