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Late Night Creep
Eyes closed
The fresh breeze trying to awake my senses
I felt the crisp cold of the night air
Slowly arousing each bump
on my ivory, shimmering skin
As the rays of moonlight
danced off my walls,
I recalled
I did not leave the window open....
Suddenly his presence was felt
Hot breath on the base of my neck
made my clenched thighs melt
Aroused
So afraid to open my eyes
Who was this...being...I couldn't deny?
Whose breath created puddles between my highs
And rivers at my lows
He slipped into my domain
Like spider man,
he came to claim his Mary Jane
Traced his web from the peak of my breasts
down to my rivers crest,
dripping into a wet spot on the bed
I moaned...still unaware of how he got here
Ached to feel his inviting girth
Vigorous kisses were placed on me first,
his tongue slowly traced my lips
Still to petrified to open my eyes
my moans turned to whimpering cries
Silently hoping he'd kiss my royal tip
like silk his tongue would have slipped
in between my slit
And he would have tasted the sweetness of my fear
I hoped he would binge drink me
Bring my shivers to cohere the flesh bumps that spread across my warm plane,
like a platonic plague
Reality seeming vague,
XTC would then fade,
and exultant rays peaked on the horizon
Failed attempts to open my eyes,
they had felt trapped and heavy
Like I was blind folded in euphoric envy
Rhapsodies formed in my clitoral dome
Rapturous earthquakes built in my biological biome
I felt something soft press against my mouth
"Open" a voice announced
Petrified, yet moist inside,
he seemed to sense my tense
"Relax", as my hesitance did not allow any resist....
My skittishness more with my racing heart, as I craved that mysteriousness
So I obeyed, relentlessly
Shamefully, non reluctantly
and slurped like it would be my
last drink for days
Each drop that was tasted
was savored and basted on desirable buds
Remnants on my lips were smeared and rubbed
Following along the penile line from bottom up
Gently yet firmly I felt a fistful of hair
Being tugged in a turn of dominant introspect
Stomach to the bed
Head pushed into the pillow
Hands grabbed my hips and bent me at a obtuse angle
Firm nudges with his thumbs,
my sign to arch my back,
A rough grunt as each inch slipped in the tight orgasmic trap
Oceanic flesh waved across my jiggling assets with each smack
Each stroke of delicious thickness
brought me closer to climax
My moans were now my tuned out screams
As he studied their volume and intensity,
letting them be his guidance and key
to break my weir, unlock my weak
Trying so hard to see his face,
all I could think of was his taste
as I got closer to the bright flood gates,
beyond the saturated state,
Where there was low rumbling from his gut
I could feel his head start to swell with his bottled up nut
I was being pushed over a blissful spillway
Knowing we were about to release
on a simultaneous basis.....
I finally turned my head and opened my eyes
to face him......
And awoke drenched in sweat, in a dark room
Alone, with my heavy breathing
Pussy aching and feeling emotionally abused
Realizing it was all a sleep induced, hallucinogenic ruse
Ain't that a Bitch?
My own mind is my worst tease?
A girl can't even cum in her own dream....
Now I got to get these hands to work,
so I at least can get some damn sleep!
Published 17th Nov 2016
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17th Nov 2016 4:11pm
17th Nov 2016 5:13pm
17th Nov 2016 5:18pm
Yeah, I need a break after this one. Don't you hate the dreams you have where you wake up right before the end? The worst. Great write
17th Nov 2016 6:11pm
17th Nov 2016 5:20pm
"Ain't that a Bitch?
My own mind is my worst tease?"
..ahhhh..the agony..
but i'll focus on the unadulterated bliss
you spilled in exquisite excess
"Gently yet firmly I felt a fistful of hair
Being tugged in a turn of dominant introspect
Stomach to the bed
Head pushed into the pillow
Hands grabbed my hips and bent me at a obtuse angle
Firm nudges with his thumbs,
my sign to arch my back,
A rough grunt as each inch slipped in the tight orgasmic trap "
whew!!..the way a woman should be handled..
and yet again you've given me another
flashback....now i gotta go diggin in the archives
thanks to this dark twisted erotic journey..
17th Nov 2016 6:12pm
Indeed exactly how we need to be handled!
Well I wish you luck on your journey to dig.
I'll look forward to reading the archives 😊
Well I wish you luck on your journey to dig.
I'll look forward to reading the archives 😊
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17th Nov 2016 6:13pm
Thank you! Yea man, I was telling myself to get it!!! Lol such a teasing trip.
18th Nov 2016 3:42am
Haha damn @endingg
That was very thoughtfully written, stuck in a trance a little bit r we ? It was kind of a dreamy daydream I sincerely hope the object of your -affection - is aware . beautiful stuffs
That was very thoughtfully written, stuck in a trance a little bit r we ? It was kind of a dreamy daydream I sincerely hope the object of your -affection - is aware . beautiful stuffs
18th Nov 2016 5:46am
18th Nov 2016 8:19am
Omg!!! WOW... This felt like a dream I wish to cum true too! lol
Hott damn my dear you truly laid it down!!! Whee doggie! lol
Hott damn my dear you truly laid it down!!! Whee doggie! lol
18th Nov 2016 2:51pm
18th Nov 2016 10:06pm
What a tragedy, to be so close and soooooo far… tragic
To be on the edge and not be able to fall in intoxicatingly
‘Darling” to be Wendy and keep your window open for Peter Pan, to dance all night with him for him to not even take you to Neverland…
This person in your dreams must be a pure erotic wizard to torture you with such lustful spells. Very very hot piece heart raced during the whole read. Brilliant
To be on the edge and not be able to fall in intoxicatingly
‘Darling” to be Wendy and keep your window open for Peter Pan, to dance all night with him for him to not even take you to Neverland…
This person in your dreams must be a pure erotic wizard to torture you with such lustful spells. Very very hot piece heart raced during the whole read. Brilliant
Yes, it was a catastrophic yet remarkable anomaly. Instead of flying me away to never land with neurotic seas and naked mermaids, He left me in a land of never like a crook, after getting me hooked. 😩.
This dream man is a master wizard of my erotic scrolls....I would sleep a thousand times just for another tease, it was that breathtaking. Thanks for the read....!
This dream man is a master wizard of my erotic scrolls....I would sleep a thousand times just for another tease, it was that breathtaking. Thanks for the read....!
27th Nov 2016 2:54pm
27th Nov 2016 7:10pm
