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-Shattered-
I dreamt
of two suns
entwined || melting
the sands of time
-into glass
The moon
looked on||then
fell from the sky,
free from it's bond
-at long last
of two suns
entwined || melting
the sands of time
-into glass
The moon
looked on||then
fell from the sky,
free from it's bond
-at long last
Published 15th Nov 2016
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15th Nov 2016 3:34pm
This was a great read.
A nice story told completely without the use of overdrawn words.
Short and sweet!
KW
A nice story told completely without the use of overdrawn words.
Short and sweet!
KW
15th Nov 2016 6:16pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Nov 2016 6:27pm
15th Nov 2016 5:19pm
You are so deeply stimulating to me,
i've any words for this one, it feels like
the haunting of my heart
i've any words for this one, it feels like
the haunting of my heart
15th Nov 2016 6:18pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
15th Nov 2016 5:44pm
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15th Nov 2016 6:20pm
Aem
you should know
about magic,love
You produce it
with ease
Thanks so much,dear
Jamie
you should know
about magic,love
You produce it
with ease
Thanks so much,dear
Jamie
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
15th Nov 2016 6:32pm
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15th Nov 2016 7:56pm
much to reflect on and a fine coherent tight write
A beautiful reality and metaphor
A beautiful reality and metaphor
15th Nov 2016 7:58pm
much to reflect on and a fine coherent tight write
A beautiful reality and metaphor
A beautiful reality and metaphor
15th Nov 2016 8:26pm
Oh Whoah
I'm honored by
the mighty
whale
So thankful,
and humbled by your
words
A bow to you
Thank you
Jamie
I'm honored by
the mighty
whale
So thankful,
and humbled by your
words
A bow to you
Thank you
Jamie
