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-the healer
in her heart she finds truth so tangible
it weighs heavily on her soul, under constant
pressure, like she's always been in too deep
for anyone to realize, she didn't want to drown...
the voices are many and the cries are all the same
it's amazing how difficult it can be to find your place
when you're the center of everything you've never
asked for, but choose to love anyway...
you're a healer, a being of light
there are no dark sides
only spots where your purpose has taken its toll
and made you question the very things
that make you beautiful...
I just wanted you to know, you're not alone...
hang in there...
-ed
Written by
DiscipleofLife
(Fenom)
Published 5th Nov 2016
| Edited 31st Dec 2016
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Re. -the healer
5th Nov 2016 7:45pm
It's hard not to drown from the weight of this place, but even still, sinking is not an option.
I've seen this place, and the waters are always warm.
Well said...
I've seen this place, and the waters are always warm.
Well said...
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Re: Re. -the healer
7th Nov 2016 3:53am
Re. -the healer
6th Nov 2016 00:13am
Beautifully written. I love this inspirational piece, and your so right, you have to hang in there, giving up should never be an option and it's sad that so many do. Excellent work, respectfully,
SURVIVOR
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Re: Re. -the healer
7th Nov 2016 3:53am
Re. -the healer
6th Nov 2016 9:00am
Re: Re. -the healer
7th Nov 2016 3:55am
Re. -the healer
7th Nov 2016 2:43am
Re: Re. -the healer
7th Nov 2016 3:56am
I'm more than thrilled to have touched your heart, Ahavati. Be well... :)
Re. -the healer
Anonymous
7th Nov 2016 6:09am
And I'm letting you know that on this night,
your words has gotten the very best of
me.
I'm am completely shook and speechless,
in a beautiful terrifying way.
thank you for being a soul felt composer.
how rare.
your words has gotten the very best of
me.
I'm am completely shook and speechless,
in a beautiful terrifying way.
thank you for being a soul felt composer.
how rare.

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Re: Re. -the healer
7th Nov 2016 7:37am
I'm humbled by your very kind words. I'm glad you found something for yourself in my poem...
Be well,
-ed
Be well,
-ed
Re. -the healer
7th Nov 2016 3:09pm
I know these words aren't for me...but I feel them. Thank you for writing them and sharing them here.
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Re: Re. -the healer
7th Nov 2016 5:18pm
It was inspired by someone specific I've met, but poetry is for everyone to take something from hopefully...
Re. -the healer
12th Nov 2016 9:35am
Re. -the healer
22nd Mar 2017 10:57am
Such a beautiful and deeply moving piece!
"only spots where your purpose has taken its toll
and made you question the very things
that make you beautiful..." > you gave me something to ponder on, thank you!
I can't believe I never encountered you before, but I will definitely read more of you... you have a way with words...
"only spots where your purpose has taken its toll
and made you question the very things
that make you beautiful..." > you gave me something to ponder on, thank you!
I can't believe I never encountered you before, but I will definitely read more of you... you have a way with words...
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Re: Re. -the healer
Again, you're too kind... :)
Reading some of your stuff I can see how you may relate to this.
You're obviously quite beautiful physically, but I can tell you have a huge heart and intelligent mind. You're doing just fine. the most beautiful thing in the world is kindness...
Be well...
Reading some of your stuff I can see how you may relate to this.
You're obviously quite beautiful physically, but I can tell you have a huge heart and intelligent mind. You're doing just fine. the most beautiful thing in the world is kindness...
Be well...
Re: Re. -the healer
22nd Mar 2017 2:52pm
I think many can relate, that's why poems like these are so valuable! I agree with you that kindness is the most beautiful thing in the world... thank you for 'seeing' me :-)
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Re. -the healer
Anonymous
25th Mar 2017 2:33pm
i am in this dim lit space you speak of. For whomever, youve touched me gently
and im inspired to bleed soft palate ..right at this moment
and im inspired to bleed soft palate ..right at this moment

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Re: Re. -the healer
25th Mar 2017 4:01pm
We are all meant to be lost at times, but if you use kindness and love as your guide you'll always find your way... :) Thanks for reading...