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"SUCK..."
Come girl n' SUCK...
Please, come n' claim this nut
Empty out these blues
This cockhead is needin' you...
Suck...drink freely
n' frequently
Knead those balls,
while feedin' on me...
Suck, suck, suck...
Why must I beg?
got enough nut-juice to fill a keg...
Suck n' swallow my boilin' angst
take it all outta me, suck this
fat, hard, thick dick, to relieve
this petrified steel, givin' me elations
to reel, to knees I'd kneel, n' incessantly thank...
Please, come n' claim this nut
Empty out these blues
This cockhead is needin' you...
Suck...drink freely
n' frequently
Knead those balls,
while feedin' on me...
Suck, suck, suck...
Why must I beg?
got enough nut-juice to fill a keg...
Suck n' swallow my boilin' angst
take it all outta me, suck this
fat, hard, thick dick, to relieve
this petrified steel, givin' me elations
to reel, to knees I'd kneel, n' incessantly thank...
Published 23rd Oct 2016
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23rd Oct 2016 10:50pm
someone needs to hit the studio and put this with a beat lol
dope...very entertaining
dope...very entertaining
24th Oct 2016 00:11am
Well bro. If u have a musical accompaniment idea, I'm all for it! lol
N thanks a bunch for the time n thoughts...I truly appreciate it. :)
N thanks a bunch for the time n thoughts...I truly appreciate it. :)
24th Oct 2016 00:38am
I def have some musical connects, if you really wanted to give it a try. they have been trying to get me in the studio but Im chicken lol
24th Oct 2016 00:42am
Fuck yea I do bro! Let me see/hear what u can do wit it! It may be the start of a great collaboration u never know. :)
24th Oct 2016 00:47am
24th Oct 2016 1:10am
* in my shug avery voice* You sho is horny! lollol...
Now, I'm a woman that loves fellatio, but while reading this, my cognitive reflex was, "Nah, I'm not hunger, I'm not thirsty and I ain't in the mood." lmbo...
Now, I'm a woman that loves fellatio, but while reading this, my cognitive reflex was, "Nah, I'm not hunger, I'm not thirsty and I ain't in the mood." lmbo...
24th Oct 2016 7:36am
Well I'm sorry you weren't, but hey
can't blame a guy for askin! lol
Thank you sweetheart, appreciate u much :)
can't blame a guy for askin! lol
Thank you sweetheart, appreciate u much :)
24th Oct 2016 3:25pm
24th Oct 2016 7:40pm
It was clear!? Wow n I thought I was being very vague! lmao. Seriously, I thank you muchly n always for your support :)
Anonymous
24th Oct 2016 5:22pm
You are nothing if not direct, my friend! I love it! Made me smile...and giggle a little, I confess. ;)
24th Oct 2016 7:43pm
24th Oct 2016 7:42pm
24th Oct 2016 8:12pm
Lol yea u may be right lol... Happy you liked my sweetness, n as always I truly appreciate your support :)
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
24th Oct 2016 9:01pm
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24th Oct 2016 9:51pm
Hey that was a bullseye! Lol
Thanks my sweetie, guess it don't amount to much though, STILL in need... but yea your support is always appreciated :)
Thanks my sweetie, guess it don't amount to much though, STILL in need... but yea your support is always appreciated :)
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Jun 2019 1:47pm
24th Oct 2016 10:01pm
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25th Oct 2016 00:18am
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28th Oct 2016 00:57am
Hey my mommy taught me manners! lol... Thank you my sweetie... Happy to hear from u always :)
25th Nov 2016 1:16pm
I had to come read SUCK 1 first before reading the other, I gotta tell ya , from personal experience ;) the please is nice. It's the incessant thank you that really makes it worth while, how grateful a man is hahaha I think I read this too early in the morning. Erotic write I'll read the second later .
25th Nov 2016 2:56pm
Yea beyond doubt I've always been grateful for such an amazing treat from a woman lol... Appreciate your thoughts n support sweetheart :)
