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The Female Player
her curves are killer, so they say
straight from the devil’s cloth
but her lips smell of poison
never would I dare touch
the story seems all too familiar
just another pretty face
talking of love and respect
words cheaper than Sunday wine
preaches to me of truth
all while speaking her lies
claims that she’s all caring
when all I’ve ever felt is frigid air
I know this so called “fairytale”
all up in my shit, until she’s not
going around like a victim
saying that I violated her
whatever, I could careless
she is not my kind of lady anyway
her pussy might smell sweet to some
but to me it reeks of only piss
no, I’m not so easily fooled
she can find some other boy toy
I know what love and care looks like
and it’s much prettier than that
straight from the devil’s cloth
but her lips smell of poison
never would I dare touch
the story seems all too familiar
just another pretty face
talking of love and respect
words cheaper than Sunday wine
preaches to me of truth
all while speaking her lies
claims that she’s all caring
when all I’ve ever felt is frigid air
I know this so called “fairytale”
all up in my shit, until she’s not
going around like a victim
saying that I violated her
whatever, I could careless
she is not my kind of lady anyway
her pussy might smell sweet to some
but to me it reeks of only piss
no, I’m not so easily fooled
she can find some other boy toy
I know what love and care looks like
and it’s much prettier than that
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Re. The Female Player
20th Oct 2016 7:10pm
Aha! Don't want to offend here, but Solomon found not a one! And trust me, he had many to choose from. Lol watch out! :) great write!
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Re: Re. The Female Player
20th Oct 2016 7:18pm
Yeah, but he was a king 😂
Many ladies stick around when your a king 😎 So I heard 😜
Thanks lovely lady.
I'm sure your one of the good ones 😬
Many ladies stick around when your a king 😎 So I heard 😜
Thanks lovely lady.
I'm sure your one of the good ones 😬
Re: Re. The Female Player
20th Oct 2016 7:22pm
Haha, thanks but I'm a woman...I battle flesh every day. I fall more than I stand my friend!
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Re: Re. The Female Player
21st Oct 2016 7:49am
Re. The Female Player
20th Oct 2016 8:15pm
"I know what love and care looks like
and it’s much prettier than that"
Pretty much sums it up, right there. :)
and it’s much prettier than that"
Pretty much sums it up, right there. :)
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Re: Re. The Female Player
21st Oct 2016 7:50am
Re. The Female Player
Anonymous
20th Oct 2016 8:26pm
Love this raw....all up in your face write 💓
Gotta watch those curvy women. 💋
Gotta watch those curvy women. 💋
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Re: Re. The Female Player
21st Oct 2016 7:53am
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Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 4:49pm
Hahaha!!
....ah. That brought back some memories;)
....ah. That brought back some memories;)
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Re: Re. The Female Player
21st Oct 2016 5:29pm
Re. The Female Player
20th Oct 2016 10:18pm
if lying, scream VIOLATED! people who know her & yourself know the truth, may not admit it but they know! Love the new write. much respect,
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21st Oct 2016 1:23pm
Re. The Female Player
21st Oct 2016 1:10am
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21st Oct 2016 1:24pm
Re. The Female Player
21st Oct 2016 4:29am
Outstanding piece of ink... strong message, brilliant wording!
Those last two lines are amazing... you deserve the best, dear DC!!!
Those last two lines are amazing... you deserve the best, dear DC!!!
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21st Oct 2016 1:26pm