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Be Mine
I don't want to own you
I don't want to possess you
I just want you to be mine,
To hold you in my arms tonight,
I just want to be yours
I dare not ask for more
You'll always be you,
And I'll always be me,
And whatever we do,
May we always be free.
With you, I never need to guess,
We're always more, and never less.
I don't want to own you
I don't want to possess you
I just want you to be mine
I don't want to possess you
I just want you to be mine,
To hold you in my arms tonight,
I just want to be yours
I dare not ask for more
You'll always be you,
And I'll always be me,
And whatever we do,
May we always be free.
With you, I never need to guess,
We're always more, and never less.
I don't want to own you
I don't want to possess you
I just want you to be mine
Published 2nd Aug 2011
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2nd Aug 2011 8:14pm
i like this,nice and simple poem prophet.
with a good contradiction at the end.
"I don't want to possess you
I just want you to be mine"
if she was your's then you would in effect possess her. :)
fair play !
shine on
with a good contradiction at the end.
"I don't want to possess you
I just want you to be mine"
if she was your's then you would in effect possess her. :)
fair play !
shine on
8th Aug 2011 3:53am
Thanks, man. That line just came to me as I was thinking about love and relationships.
Where does the line of love and trust blur with jealousy and possessiveness?
So I played with semantics and contradictions, and came up with this love poem.
Where does the line of love and trust blur with jealousy and possessiveness?
So I played with semantics and contradictions, and came up with this love poem.
