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paranoid thoughts
I approach like a quiet storm
with power I come
knowing full well
with one word I can cut or bring peace
Territorial disputes ever present
fallen angels on my mind
their squabbling over people and places
think of the drug cartel times one hundred
then you would understand this war
I ride the net but I wonder what's riding me?
Paranoid thoughts
such things clash in my brain
bring me to my knees
Need a safe passage to enter
though I wonder is it insanity?
or simply a higher sense of conscious
With trepidation I travel
hear them whisper be well
with their dark sardonic voice
a not so veiled threat
curdles my blood
I will not bow though
fuck them and their war
I'm not a pawn to be shuffled about
i'll cross enemy lines
leave my mark on minds
that are eager to see and hear
The fallen but shadows to me
an insane flicker on the horizon
until I snuff them out
crush the head of the snakes
that slither in my garden
Published 17th Oct 2016
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17th Oct 2016 1:21pm
avenging angel, hear the beating of your dark wings, Crim,
infidels cut down by your sword.
warrior writing...
infidels cut down by your sword.
warrior writing...
17th Oct 2016 8:06pm
17th Oct 2016 1:36pm
WOW... As a young adult I used to get shit from everyone I knew about ME being "paranoid" n my reply to them was always something I thought was uniquely
my very own saying- "I'm not paranoid...I have a heightened sense of awareness..." n reading ur slant on that blows me away! lol
Very strong pen lady C!
my very own saying- "I'm not paranoid...I have a heightened sense of awareness..." n reading ur slant on that blows me away! lol
Very strong pen lady C!
17th Oct 2016 8:07pm
17th Oct 2016 1:41pm
This is an amazingly powerful write. Favorite lines...
"I will not bow though
fuck them and their war
I'm not a pawn to be shuffled about"
I can see the struggle in it, but this screams of taking the reins to me. Very strong. :)
"I will not bow though
fuck them and their war
I'm not a pawn to be shuffled about"
I can see the struggle in it, but this screams of taking the reins to me. Very strong. :)
17th Oct 2016 8:08pm
thank you lovely Willow trying to take control by inking out these thoughts.. deeply appreciate you beautiful..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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17th Oct 2016 8:08pm
Anonymous
17th Oct 2016 2:54pm
Truly love this real, raw ink.
The opening stanza...sets the pace.
Brilliant 💓
The opening stanza...sets the pace.
Brilliant 💓
17th Oct 2016 8:11pm
17th Oct 2016 3:23pm
We have been given power to trample over snakes, take hold of that strength and triumph. The battle is very real and it is every day. Stay the course and the victory will be yours. Struggle for me is always played out like an actual fight or battle. This resonated with me very much.
17th Oct 2016 8:09pm
17th Oct 2016 3:40pm
Taking the fight to 'um is one sure was to freak them out and cause chaos.
17th Oct 2016 8:09pm
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17th Oct 2016 8:10pm
17th Oct 2016 4:54pm
Ahh Crim this has the
ring of an epic tale to
it.
Visions of apocryphal
events it induces, and
ancient rivalries.
Another amazing write... Pan
ring of an epic tale to
it.
Visions of apocryphal
events it induces, and
ancient rivalries.
Another amazing write... Pan
17th Oct 2016 8:10pm
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17th Oct 2016 9:36pm
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18th Oct 2016 8:43am
The things that slither in your garden,Crim,a dangerous place to venture through in the darkness.
Your poetic verses always leave a mark on our minds. Powerful piece,slayer of words....
Your poetic verses always leave a mark on our minds. Powerful piece,slayer of words....
18th Oct 2016 12:15pm
18th Oct 2016 11:16pm
youve managed to churn out some angry beauty - jusy love what you have done here :-)
I am not paranoid - everyone is out to get me - that;s what the voices say
I am not paranoid - everyone is out to get me - that;s what the voices say
20th Oct 2016 2:42pm
Anonymous
20th Oct 2016 11:28am
I swear on everything and nothing,
that this.. .this piece shook my entire
attire..
damnit my ladyloves, damn it
forgive me, im speechless
that this.. .this piece shook my entire
attire..
damnit my ladyloves, damn it
forgive me, im speechless
20th Oct 2016 2:43pm
Anonymous
21st Oct 2016 11:01pm
Brenda.. loved every word, of this poetic masterpiece.. your pen is strong, and your warrior soul.. bleeds through the parchment, and shakes our foundations.. and thirst for truth.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
22nd Oct 2016 9:15pm
