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Lyrically Lusting (Envisioning Your Strut)
Forgive me in advance before my next line of candidness,
but I can’t evade the fact of wondering what transpires
when you take those powerful steps
and each groove of your zipper begins flirting with my reasoning.
I want to inbox you intimate stories hidden behind my curves,
Box you in with the strawberry saliva trailing my smile
as passionate as the throb between your firm thighs
slides against the feverish sweat of my breasts.
My jewel…
spilled it’s warm secret before my fingers even had a chance
to properly reveal it…
all because I’ve visualized your bulge in stride.
I’m mentally drained from yearning you,
a beautiful exhaustion… chasing the scent of your swagger.
The way you walk through my mind with your words
and stroll through my thoughts with your verbs
causing cognitive climaxes within the lines of this illusion,
an optic gratification of the written kind.
Adjectives are understated as I try to define just how badly
I want to have my way with you.
I've imagined your cambric clinging to the distant synopsis
of my voracious tongue,
where the pulse of your muscle capture my licks.
Lewd sounds created from passion’s cream;
lathering the flesh of married thighs with legs pointed due north
saluting the sky’s fetish in my open-toed stilettos.
You have no idea how desperately I want to feel your touch.
I could love…. sucking you!
I mean…..
I’ve tasted the afterglow of your release in my womb,
all because I’ve created a reflection and memorized the
masculinity of your stance, while lyrically lusting…
envisioning your strut.
Rain~
Published 12th Oct 2016
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12th Oct 2016 2:20am
25th Oct 2016 6:43am
3rd Jan 2017 2:16pm
No one writes erotica like you Rain. You remain elegant while living up to that extreme content warning. It has lines that get me lyrically aroused. This, for example:
the strawberry saliva trailing my smile
as passionate as the throb between your firm thighs
slides against the feverish sweat of my breasts.
I'm just going to have to work on my strut. Meanwhile, thanks for the turn on Lady Rain.
the strawberry saliva trailing my smile
as passionate as the throb between your firm thighs
slides against the feverish sweat of my breasts.
I'm just going to have to work on my strut. Meanwhile, thanks for the turn on Lady Rain.
Crow, I'm so pleased you can discern the sophistication of my erotic ink and admire it's rare explicit edges. I'm appreciative of your observations. That stanza you picked out painted a raw image didn't it?! Ha!
btw...I'm certain your strut and swagger would make a girl lyrically lust... ;) Thank you for cyber-shelving her...
btw...I'm certain your strut and swagger would make a girl lyrically lust... ;) Thank you for cyber-shelving her...
12th Oct 2016 2:55am
25th Oct 2016 7:20am
Ha! That's a good thing, right?! ;)
"Excuse me a minute (more to cum)" <-- ????
Thanks for keeping her, Archie!
"Excuse me a minute (more to cum)" <-- ????
Thanks for keeping her, Archie!
12th Oct 2016 3:00am
Yea... In the words of Jodeci:
"Take my money, my house n my car...for one hit of you, you can have it all... Cuz u know, I can't leave you alone...you got me feenin..." Lol just as this ink does, WOW!!
"Take my money, my house n my car...for one hit of you, you can have it all... Cuz u know, I can't leave you alone...you got me feenin..." Lol just as this ink does, WOW!!
25th Oct 2016 7:31am
lol... If I've got you quoting Jodeci... then my pen must have been on point! ;)
Love your comment Poe, and so happy you decided to snatch her up...
Thanks luv..
Love your comment Poe, and so happy you decided to snatch her up...
Thanks luv..
12th Oct 2016 3:57am
25th Oct 2016 7:49am
lol...Anytime I render a reader speechless my pen has did her job. ;)
Thank you suga' and I adore you for kidnapping her....
Thank you suga' and I adore you for kidnapping her....
12th Oct 2016 4:09am
no the f u didn't! you ain't just incinerate my mind like that, "strawberry saliva" , just freaking phenomenon rain, ...that's y u goddess...
25th Oct 2016 7:56am
"no the f u didn't! you ain't just incinerate my mind like that" <-- that was certainly my intention, professor! ;) You're cute when you're excited. lol.. Thanks for cyber-shelving her Dean....
12th Oct 2016 5:42am
Oh my-my Rain! Your mastery over poetry is exceeded only by your mastery over men...
Makes me wish I had an once of swagger!!!
JJ
Makes me wish I had an once of swagger!!!
JJ
25th Oct 2016 8:03am
lol...don't think I've quite mastery the art of mind controlling men, but a girl does try, JJ! ;) ...and trust me, you have a charming swagger that's very seductive. Appreciate you keeping her...
Anonymous
12th Oct 2016 10:52am
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25th Oct 2016 7:44pm
12th Oct 2016 12:04pm
25th Oct 2016 7:46pm
Thank you Duende! :) Thanks for stopping by and showing me a little poetic-love...
Anonymous
12th Oct 2016 12:38pm
Sexy as hell 💋
"The way you walk through my mind with your words
and stroll through my thoughts with your verbs
causing cognitive climaxes within the lines of this illusion,
an optic gratification of the written kind. "
....uhm. Yes. That 💓
"The way you walk through my mind with your words
and stroll through my thoughts with your verbs
causing cognitive climaxes within the lines of this illusion,
an optic gratification of the written kind. "
....uhm. Yes. That 💓
25th Oct 2016 9:20pm
WTheart, stimulating our mind is the only way a man can penetrate anything else from a woman with worth. ;).... but dammit if the perfect strut don't make your mouth water. ;) Thank you suga'!
12th Oct 2016 1:50pm
I'm a bit thunderstruck by this...There are so many levels on which this is a thing of beauty. I'll just fan myself on the way out...wow!
25th Oct 2016 9:23pm
12th Oct 2016 4:20pm
Oh dear, you lustful. sinful woman! Oh how glad I am to read your sexy soul in ink!
A masterpiece.
A masterpiece.
25th Oct 2016 9:27pm
"lustful sinful woman?!" <-- I'll take it! lol... You keep posting inspirational comments regarding my pen, and my pen will keep creating poems for you to inhale ;) Thanks Tony!
12th Oct 2016 6:53pm
you a bad woman Tara.. yes ma'am. .. this is rare raw ink indeed...
Like staight up in ya face...
Like staight up in ya face...
25th Oct 2016 9:35pm
I'm not sure why the song, 'She's A Bad Mama Jama' came to mind reading your comment Naajir, but the lyrics do make me feel 'BAD' in a good way. Haha... Thanks luv, and adore you for taking her home... ;)
Anonymous
12th Oct 2016 8:32pm
Miss Rain, Miss Rain ... `I’ve tasted the afterglow of your release in my womb,` ... there`s a reason why you are the Queen of Sensual Eroticism ... It is poems like these - poems that leave me mesmerized & speechless - that should stop me from writing poetry altogether and leave the talent to Poetesses like you and those that follow ... love to you, Woman, for another jaw-dropping, stellar write! ... ~Devlin.
25th Oct 2016 9:48pm
First thing first, your profile pic is deliciously HAWT! :)
For you to say my ink leaves you mesmerized and speechless...is a grand compliment, Dev. You are one of my favorite writers on this site, and when your pen goes MIA, there's a void of brilliancy around the underground. Your comment is amazing,......just like you. xo Thanks sweety!
For you to say my ink leaves you mesmerized and speechless...is a grand compliment, Dev. You are one of my favorite writers on this site, and when your pen goes MIA, there's a void of brilliancy around the underground. Your comment is amazing,......just like you. xo Thanks sweety!
Anonymous
13th Oct 2016 00:17am
My dear this is pure seductive luxury .. incredible.
✨Trish 💋
✨Trish 💋
25th Oct 2016 9:51pm
Trish, your one line response, is the perfect inspirational reply. ;)
Thank you beautiful and I appreciate you keeping her. Pen love~
Thank you beautiful and I appreciate you keeping her. Pen love~
15th Oct 2016 2:28pm
To be transfixed
Staggering
Engulfed to what is
You words
Making the most grounded man
Feel this is written for him
I thank you for all for this fix
The need we all wish to receive
Your eroticism is next to none
As your words can make a blind man feel
Even he can see
Staggering
Engulfed to what is
You words
Making the most grounded man
Feel this is written for him
I thank you for all for this fix
The need we all wish to receive
Your eroticism is next to none
As your words can make a blind man feel
Even he can see
Wow! G, your comments always have a way of making my mind go there, go to that place of lyrical lusting.
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"Making the most grounded man
Feel this is written for him" <---- as it should be! :) Thanks hon, and elated you took her home...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"Making the most grounded man
Feel this is written for him" <---- as it should be! :) Thanks hon, and elated you took her home...
Anonymous
16th Oct 2016 2:17am
Lady Rain.. luscious ink.. a man who makes you feel this way, must be special.. and your writes have such passion.. with love..
Dave
Dave
25th Oct 2016 9:59pm
Dave, thank you so much for the ink support, and yes.... he is pretty darn special. :)
16th Oct 2016 3:06am
Woman.
Rain, luv ~
I am nigh speechless caught here:
My jewel…
spilled it’s warm secret before my fingers even had a chance
to properly reveal it…
in an endless loop captivated by this too:
all because I’ve visualized your bulge in stride.
I’m mentally drained from yearning you,
a beautiful exhaustion… chasing the scent of your swagger.
The way you walk through my mind with your words
and stroll through my thoughts with your verbs
causing cognitive climaxes within the lines of this illusion,
an optic gratification of the written kind.
I could quote this whole poem, luv, and still not have my fill of you blessing my lips, honeying my tongue... :-*
Rain, you are such an enormously talented and exquisite poet. I can only spill my warm secrets before you, luv...
Rain, luv ~
I am nigh speechless caught here:
My jewel…
spilled it’s warm secret before my fingers even had a chance
to properly reveal it…
in an endless loop captivated by this too:
all because I’ve visualized your bulge in stride.
I’m mentally drained from yearning you,
a beautiful exhaustion… chasing the scent of your swagger.
The way you walk through my mind with your words
and stroll through my thoughts with your verbs
causing cognitive climaxes within the lines of this illusion,
an optic gratification of the written kind.
I could quote this whole poem, luv, and still not have my fill of you blessing my lips, honeying my tongue... :-*
Rain, you are such an enormously talented and exquisite poet. I can only spill my warm secrets before you, luv...
25th Oct 2016 10:03pm
"I could quote this whole poem, luv, and still not have my fill of you blessing my lips, honeying my tongue... :-*
Rain, you are such an enormously talented and exquisite poet. I can only spill my warm secrets before you, luv... " <---girl, that kinda'-sorta turned me on! lol.. For real and so serious! ;) Thank you sexy Savaja!
Rain, you are such an enormously talented and exquisite poet. I can only spill my warm secrets before you, luv... " <---girl, that kinda'-sorta turned me on! lol.. For real and so serious! ;) Thank you sexy Savaja!
20th Oct 2016 5:49am
25th Oct 2016 10:04pm
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21st Oct 2016 00:32am
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25th Oct 2016 10:09pm
Tim, thank you so much for the beautiful comment! Your praise was so very kind... :)
25th Oct 2016 7:47am
"I’m mentally drained from yearning you,
a beautiful exhaustion… chasing the scent of your swagger. ". Excuse my language but fuck!! I felt chills down my spine. Amazing!
a beautiful exhaustion… chasing the scent of your swagger. ". Excuse my language but fuck!! I felt chills down my spine. Amazing!
lol... Spinal chills are always the perfect confirmation of appreciation, lyricalA! ;)Thank you suga' for visiting my neighborhood....
2nd Jan 2017 5:33pm
Any man that can inspire a woman to these type of thoughts considers himself to be very fortunate!
2nd Jan 2017 9:47pm
Thanks Ted....
the infancy of inspiration always begin in the mind, when lust manipulates you.
Appreciate you taking her home with you.
the infancy of inspiration always begin in the mind, when lust manipulates you.
Appreciate you taking her home with you.
23rd Jun 2017 6:40pm
Wow.. this is some very hot seductive ink right here! I'm really liking this piece. 🌌🔥
24th Jun 2017 2:45am
23rd Dec 2017 4:52am
You make erotica into a fine art which is elegant to the point of take me in all the way and holding on until I can't stand the tease. The brain is the most important sex organ it is said. And your verse surely is attuned to those erogenous zones of the mind-body. Forever, your disciple in slide of hand on thigh tricks.
John
John
23rd Dec 2017 7:36am
It's your comments that are like erotic-fine art, John! Thank you for dropping love my way.😘
2nd Jul 2023 8:20pm
Favourite lines:
My jewel…
spilled it’s warm secret before my fingers even had a chance
to properly reveal it…
all because I’ve visualized your bulge in stride.
I’ve tasted the afterglow of your release in my womb,
all because I’ve created a reflection and memorized the
masculinity of your stance, while lyrically lusting…
envisioning your strut.
My jewel…
spilled it’s warm secret before my fingers even had a chance
to properly reveal it…
all because I’ve visualized your bulge in stride.
I’ve tasted the afterglow of your release in my womb,
all because I’ve created a reflection and memorized the
masculinity of your stance, while lyrically lusting…
envisioning your strut.
