SILENCE~

I oft times find myself reading and re-reading your words (so deep the words are) and getting so caught up in the underlying current flow of the spoken as opposed to the "felt".  Your ink always leaves me in a heightened state of sensitivity, Many times, not being able to clearly rationalize what I want to even say.  That in itself my dear is power, unadulterated, intellectual power and writing at it's finest.  You are art Tara

#ifeelthispullingatmytoenails.org  #longing

"You are art Tara" <--- Wow! Don't believe I've ever had my poetry or myself be defined in such a beautiful way. You've moved me deeply with your words. So humbled and thankful, Archie! Truly! :) Loving that you took her home, appreciate you immensely...      
  

Rain.. this is simply beautiful.. damn i love your writes.. you're truly brilliant.. love to you!!



Dave

Blushing at your ego stroking words Dave, they make my eyes shine! :) Thank you so much my friend...
Much love~

"Elevated voices covered in cries" - such silk crafted turns of phrase

hey there whale, thank you so much for the lovely comment...means a lot. :)

lovely Rain such an artist you are I can hear your mellow sultry voice in these lines taste your essence it is glorious..

love Brenda

What a beautiful thing to say, Crim. :) I adore you and your constant poetic support. Thank you beautiful lady...

Stunning brilliance... I'm pretty much without words!! *bowin*

aww.... I know whenever I silence you <-- no pun intended :), I know my pen has done well. Thank you Poe! Your lyrical love is felt... and I appreciate you keeping her...

....that it does, Melia. And sometimes silence is a good thing, it makes you stop and listen from within. xo Thank you luv...  

Dear Rain, what a masterpiece!

I don't even have the words to describe how beautiful this is and what it evoked...

He stopped consuming me with his hypnotic thirst,
Intellectually lethal lips.. > stunning phrasing!
and I…..

I am silent too...

Your reply was a joy to read, Duende. I do love when I 'silence' readers. ;)  
It makes me feel as though my emotions were captured. Thank you for the lovely ink-nod...  

The evolution of a relationship doesn't always conform to our wishes -
which is it's so important to love and emotionally record the experience
as it's happening. You've done this beautifully as well as demonstrated
a graceful letting go through the silence between words in this verse.
The space you've left in silence is more powerful than words ever thought.  

This was such an amazing comment, and quite frankly, one that I definitely endorse. :) I love your mind and the way you think, Ahavati. xo
Thank you so much!

The fires usually seem to dwindle, don't they?  It's hard to find someone with whom to share "the perfect sanctuary."  Requires trust and probably the ability to write as well as you Rain.  Your phrasing and images thrill me, and I read each of your writes several times to get the full effect.  Your "Silence" is golden!

Crow, your comments they, they always get next to me. Thank you for blessing me with your encouragement, and I'm delighted you're taking her home with you. :)

At the beginning of this poem I was feeling envious of the love and your ability to express it so passionately. But the winds of change whipped my mind into a painful sadness. I cannot stand the thought of your heart suffering so.
Embracing your soul in warm ((((hugs)))) through the space between us...
JJ

aww...JJ, thank you sweetheart for feeling the ache of this ink, but ahem...you should know me by now, I mean, we do have a 4 year poetic-connection.... lol...you know I often muse without authenticity, untamed imagination, frequent fantasies, etc...  My heart is not suffering suga', but I'm blessed to know I have your shoulder to lean on. Thanks hun..xo  

Dearest Rain...
Beautifully heartbreaking write.
So much passion felt in your words...
Love that burned so bright white hot
and then no more. To feel so much and then
no more...a tragedy but so beautifully told.

Loves
Keith  

"Love that burned so bright white hot
and then no more. To feel so much and then
no more...a tragedy but so beautifully told. "<--- Oh Keith, this was so lovely!  :)

Thank you dear friend, for your devoted pen support...

"I used to misplace my sanity with him."

when the vibe started of that heavy
i knew your subsequent words would
sink even deeper..

i'm just really running out of adjectives
to describe your artistry Tara..
just pure exquisiteness..

"i'm just really running out of adjectives
to describe your artistry Tara..
just pure exquisiteness.."<--- a powerful compliment in and of itself.  :)

Thank you so much Naajir!

Moving on in silence, is lure grace. Exceptional Rain..
✨Always peace Trish

Love that Trish!  :) Thank you beautiful lady!
One Love~

Ah! Nothing ever seems to last or to grow as we would wish it to. Sweet, sad write and another fine example of your great skill as a poet rain.
Beautifully expressed.

Tony, you continuously feed me 'sweets' and I continuously gain weight off your candy-coated comments. :) Thank you my funnyman....

a mizzle of beauty and burn, 'silence' is sonorous goddess...

I've always loved the way goddess rolls off your tongue, Dean! ;)  
Thank you hun,... elated you've decided to keep her...

pretty rain, the tries shall be endless... if it's a matter of thighs.<3

aww babe, you and your words.....they have a way of getting next to me. <3

Achingly beautiful. I felt your words down into the depths of my core.
An ache which is all too familiar. Words which are reflective, in many aspects.
I wish it were all so much easier.
Thank you...for sharing this beautiful masterpiece 💓

aww WTHeart, I'm so glad you could connect to this ink, that's what poetry is all about, convincing the reader to feel your words. Your comment makes me smile in appreciation, knowing you felt my emotions. :) Thank you suga'!

There are no words to describe how beautiful this piece is. I found myself captivated with every word and image. You definitely have a way with words. I enjoy reading more of your work.

...eswaller, you've moved me with your beautifully encouraging response, and I'm very much looking forward to reading more of your art and getting to know the poetic-side of you. :) Thank you so much for the ink praise.... xo

beautiful sadness...I had to pause part way through...sensual blue ink...-J

Thank you so much!😊

Incredible writing

Thank you! I appreciate ya!😊

exquisite write, always such captivating ink, you spill..of poignant sensuality that flows upon tranquil streams, and leaves indelible impression.  adore!

~ aethie (ms. barrie)

Beautiful comment, Barrie! Thank you!
It's great hearing from you!😊

I will agree with all the comments before me. For me to articulate the beauty of your pen is indeed beyond the scope of my internal dictionary. You have a magical way of expression. I enjoyed and kept this scribe. 🌹

A lovely and kind thing for you to say, LT! Thank you so much!😊