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Demons Teem
oh darkness let us speak
it's been so long since we've conversed
feed me i'm ravenous
intravenous numbness
in need of a hellish high
unholy specter you've traveled
to and fro
I ask have you tasted
another like me?
I'm walking your plane
through the netherworld
I see your minions
I fear them not
burn and cut
slash and bleed
demons come feed
I talk for you
walk with you
run with me this night
let my curses be heard
steal, kill and destroy
those that would
seek to restrain
to train your bloodied whore
let demons feed
let demons teem
on our unholy Sabbath
curses ring true
let those who have ears to hear
bare witness to this blackened tongue
prowling the witching hour
with a curdling need
Lucifer I seek thee now
lying prostrate before your throne
a gauntlet has been thrown down
will you pick up my cause?
shade me in filth
let darkness invade
take up my unholy case
see your Queen
in her weakened state
lecherous beasts
claw their way through the ranks
please my Lord set the Hierarchy straight
feed me i'm ravenous
intravenous numbness
in need of a hellish high
let demons feed
let demons teem
bite, tear, slash and burn
fill me tonight with your vengeful glee
piss on their graves
set your hell whore free
it's been so long since we've conversed
feed me i'm ravenous
intravenous numbness
in need of a hellish high
unholy specter you've traveled
to and fro
I ask have you tasted
another like me?
I'm walking your plane
through the netherworld
I see your minions
I fear them not
burn and cut
slash and bleed
demons come feed
I talk for you
walk with you
run with me this night
let my curses be heard
steal, kill and destroy
those that would
seek to restrain
to train your bloodied whore
let demons feed
let demons teem
on our unholy Sabbath
curses ring true
let those who have ears to hear
bare witness to this blackened tongue
prowling the witching hour
with a curdling need
Lucifer I seek thee now
lying prostrate before your throne
a gauntlet has been thrown down
will you pick up my cause?
shade me in filth
let darkness invade
take up my unholy case
see your Queen
in her weakened state
lecherous beasts
claw their way through the ranks
please my Lord set the Hierarchy straight
feed me i'm ravenous
intravenous numbness
in need of a hellish high
let demons feed
let demons teem
bite, tear, slash and burn
fill me tonight with your vengeful glee
piss on their graves
set your hell whore free
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Re. Demons Teem
Anonymous
11th Oct 2016 6:27am
My Beautiful Brenda...you have outdone yourself here with this one....hell hath no fury as a woman scorned who has a bond with the Lord of Darkness....
"Lucifer I seek thee now
lying prostrate before your throne
a gauntlet has been thrown down
will you pick up my cause?
shade me in filth
let darkness invade
take up my unholy case
see your Queen
in her weakened state"
~ Never a weakened state lovely one...you always rise to unimaginable heights....
I love you so very much...
xoxoxox Taryn
"Lucifer I seek thee now
lying prostrate before your throne
a gauntlet has been thrown down
will you pick up my cause?
shade me in filth
let darkness invade
take up my unholy case
see your Queen
in her weakened state"
~ Never a weakened state lovely one...you always rise to unimaginable heights....
I love you so very much...
xoxoxox Taryn
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Re: Re. Demons Teem
11th Oct 2016 6:46am
thank you my love for such a beautiful comment yes this lady made me angry.. inspired me to reach out to my ties with the dark side ;)
I love you :)
xo Brenda
I love you :)
xo Brenda
Re. Demons Teem
Anonymous
11th Oct 2016 6:28am
Yes... yes.. Crimm this is classic you. My hell, I love it when you write. No matter what it is. Your stalker, gawker .. loves everyday
✨Trish
✨Trish
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Re: Re. Demons Teem
11th Oct 2016 6:48am
aw thank you beautiful Trish for embracing my dark side love you lady..
xo Brenda
xo Brenda
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11th Oct 2016 7:33am
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11th Oct 2016 8:40am
Re. Demons Teem
11th Oct 2016 8:05am
that's an orgy of agony among the black legions;
you load it with fire & brimstone, Crim...
you load it with fire & brimstone, Crim...
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Re. Demons Teem
11th Oct 2016 10:02am
Lovely Crimsin,queen of all things dark,you have painted the pages black with your powerful words...
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11th Oct 2016 4:37pm
Re. Demons Teem
So many of us feel the need to be 'set free'
You described this need as no one else can!
Too much great lines to quote, but this:
feed me i'm ravenous
intravenous numbness
in need of a hellish high
and 'shade me in filth' were the highlights for me!
Sending you love, dear Crim!
You described this need as no one else can!
Too much great lines to quote, but this:
feed me i'm ravenous
intravenous numbness
in need of a hellish high
and 'shade me in filth' were the highlights for me!
Sending you love, dear Crim!
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11th Oct 2016 4:38pm
Re. Demons Teem
Anonymous
11th Oct 2016 2:28pm
You create beauty with darkness like no one I've ever read before. It's distinctly you. And I love it! But then, I love all sides of you :)
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11th Oct 2016 4:38pm
Re. Demons Teem
12th Oct 2016 1:00am
Amazing work Crim! Parts of this remind me of the witches in "Macbeth" even if they weren't as erotically inclined.
on our unholy Sabbath
curses ring true
let those who have ears to hear
bare witness to this blackened tongue
"Let not light see my black and deep desires." I succumb to your spell once more dear Lady!
on our unholy Sabbath
curses ring true
let those who have ears to hear
bare witness to this blackened tongue
"Let not light see my black and deep desires." I succumb to your spell once more dear Lady!
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13th Oct 2016 00:48am
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12th Oct 2016 3:53am
You are the darkness queen, Crim! :) Hauntingly gorgeous ink, lovely lady! xo
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Anonymous
15th Oct 2016 3:55am
Goddamn, Brenda.. Hades, and i need a band.. to record this for you as a tribute.. i can't write music.. but i'd be honored to scream, and growl these words.. love you always..
Dave
Dave
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15th Oct 2016 6:06pm