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Drown
I don't know how I got here,
I'm floating.
Looking up at the sky,
The moon's waving,
And the sun's kissing the sky Good Bye.
The pink and orange bounce,
My lungs are on fire,
But I feel just fine,
I feel like letting go,
Maybe it'll take me home,
I sink deeper into oblivion,
And I feel myself going higher,
And I'm smiling,
It's finally over,
I'm gone ; I'm home.
I'm floating.
Looking up at the sky,
The moon's waving,
And the sun's kissing the sky Good Bye.
The pink and orange bounce,
My lungs are on fire,
But I feel just fine,
I feel like letting go,
Maybe it'll take me home,
I sink deeper into oblivion,
And I feel myself going higher,
And I'm smiling,
It's finally over,
I'm gone ; I'm home.
Published 11th Oct 2016
| Edited 2nd Oct 2019
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- Edited 25th Mar 2019 5:48pm
11th Oct 2016 4:23am
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11th Oct 2016 9:11am
I thought this was a great piece, love the imagery, depicts desperation perfectly, when pain mounts until nothing is felt, it almost becomes peaceful.
~anonshadow😏
~anonshadow😏
