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Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
Some leaves fall
in fall. Some are
evergreen. Some
leaves speak in
tongues; tongues
of an ancient love
based around the
globe. Some leaves
grow in spring,
an infant beginning
(a fresh love spoken
through walls & doors
& even windows, somedays)
Some grow from ink blots,
Rorschach fantasies melded
into continents, bonded closely
to pull echoes to their knees.
Some bury themselves
in Lazarus miracles,
knots of wood and bone
crawling under the skin-
etched with knowing,
pained in the telling
(it was declared in glass,
and the house creaks
in absence when night
runs dry)
grass blades of green
& tender summer stars
spell grammatical
annotations
in unsuspecting pages
amongst empty journals
& ballads sung
to magicians,
Rothschild &
Shroder in
busy rooms of
butterfly cocoons
(hands held in loving
words, phrases &
rhythms of
dreams in gold
thread)
communion in blue caves
shielded from phantasm eyes,
beckoning fingers, a tapping
of keys and melodies
filling silence with suspicion-
the door is open,
windows stillborn
(wildflowers still dance
under burdens of years;
darling, all we've got
is time)
Thank you Missy Miss, it was a privilege and honour to work with you again.
Written by
RevolutionAL
(Alistair Plint)
Published 10th Oct 2016
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Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
10th Oct 2016 10:16am
"(wildflowers still dance
under burdens of years;
darling, all we've got
is time)"
Missy and AL this is a stunning, passionate write two brilliant minds that shine like the sun coming together as one is a thing of great beauty..
love Brenda
under burdens of years;
darling, all we've got
is time)"
Missy and AL this is a stunning, passionate write two brilliant minds that shine like the sun coming together as one is a thing of great beauty..
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 1:09pm
Thank you Brenda for enjoying our words. 😊

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Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
10th Oct 2016 5:25pm
Aah Brenda
Thank you so much for all your support. You're so kind. That verse you quoted. Is one of my fave parts of the piece too.
I wonder if we even need the written version posted, for me somehow the audio is what makes it?
Love
Al-x-
P.S. Good on you & the social media pages! I felt it came out perfectly ;)
Thank you so much for all your support. You're so kind. That verse you quoted. Is one of my fave parts of the piece too.
I wonder if we even need the written version posted, for me somehow the audio is what makes it?
Love
Al-x-
P.S. Good on you & the social media pages! I felt it came out perfectly ;)
Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 6:51pm
I`ve heard & read this piece twice ~ stunning doesn`t even begin to describe this piece but breathless & brilliant is where it had taken me to; a poetic buffet of words and imagery ... An excellent collab in mind & sound & voice ... the contrast ~ I can`t even begin to say enough ... Missy, you have a beautiful voice (I told you already) and Al, my Rev, just as beautiful, yet baritone ... congrats, and I look forward to your next collab ... ~xo, Devlin.

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Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
10th Oct 2016 7:03pm
Oh my word Dev
You have me blushing profusely.
You are so kind to us,
I can not thank you enough for your support
comments and kindness.
Love @ you
Al-x-
You have me blushing profusely.
You are so kind to us,
I can not thank you enough for your support
comments and kindness.
Love @ you
Al-x-
Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
Anonymous
- Edited 10th Oct 2016 10:38pm
10th Oct 2016 10:37pm
The baritone beauty indeed, Miss Dev. Great little project. Thank you kindly for listening / reading us. 👍🏻

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Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
10th Oct 2016 10:42pm
Well THAT was just magnificently beautiful. Well done to both of you I have enjoyed reading along to the audio immensely. It was my first audio recording I've listened to on this site. I'm starting to really like this place. Very niice work.
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Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
10th Oct 2016 11:30pm
Well you know,
it's the second time you've popped past my pages and left someting of value here and well that makes us friends.
I'm glad you liked what we did with that collaboration. Missy has been wanting to do an audio collaboration for the longest time and I was lagging behind. Mostly I hadn't found the words that I felt warrented the audio. And what do you know next thing a little tongue in cheek happens and we have poetry and sounds... Awesome happy moments of celebration! Haha! Sorry I ramble when I had too much tequila! Anyhow thanks again and do pop in when ever you feel like it.
Blue Skies @ You
Al-x-
it's the second time you've popped past my pages and left someting of value here and well that makes us friends.
I'm glad you liked what we did with that collaboration. Missy has been wanting to do an audio collaboration for the longest time and I was lagging behind. Mostly I hadn't found the words that I felt warrented the audio. And what do you know next thing a little tongue in cheek happens and we have poetry and sounds... Awesome happy moments of celebration! Haha! Sorry I ramble when I had too much tequila! Anyhow thanks again and do pop in when ever you feel like it.
Blue Skies @ You
Al-x-
Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
11th Oct 2016 8:12am
A beautiful mingling of talented minds,amazing lines and stunning images.
You work so well together,you know what they say about great minds....
You work so well together,you know what they say about great minds....
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Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
11th Oct 2016 8:50am
Thanks for the awsome comment.
But I think the great mind belongs to my partner in this case. She is talented as F and a pretty awsome human being to.
Thanks for the kindness of your visit and comment.
Blue Skies @ You
Al-x-
But I think the great mind belongs to my partner in this case. She is talented as F and a pretty awsome human being to.
Thanks for the kindness of your visit and comment.
Blue Skies @ You
Al-x-
Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Oct 2016 9:29am
11th Oct 2016 9:28am
Mind(s) Al. Minds. Plural. 😊
Thank you for your lovely comment on this piece, Kasai. Glad to see you enjoyed our work 👍🏻
Thank you for your lovely comment on this piece, Kasai. Glad to see you enjoyed our work 👍🏻

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Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
13th Oct 2016 2:25am
You two have captured the magical variety of leaves in this wonderful piece. I find great comfort in your oral rendering of the words and the voicing enhanced my comprehension. Bravo!
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Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
Anonymous
13th Oct 2016 7:46pm
Glad you found something worthwhile here :)

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Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
Anonymous
13th Oct 2016 3:32pm
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Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
Anonymous
13th Oct 2016 7:43pm
It's an interesting mix of accents. It shouldn't work, but it somehow does. Thank you very much for listening / reading :)

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Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
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15th Oct 2016 2:00am
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Re: Re. Kop Raas ( Audio Collab with Miss_Sub)
15th Oct 2016 5:48pm
Most of the things that shouldn't work
definitely do...
on several parts
Like skies
;)
Al -xx-
definitely do...
on several parts
Like skies
;)
Al -xx-
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Anonymous
15th Oct 2016 5:52pm
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Anonymous
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21st Jun 2017 9:26am
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