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My Salvation
I been beaten down
always doubting myself
insecurities are poisoning me
taking my mind into dark places
such a head trip
making me wish I never said shit
what are people thinking?
do they even like me?
will anybody save me?
should I even care?
the answer is an overwhelming, no!!
sink or swim… but I plan on flying
feeling disrespected
always feeling the need to react
don’t want to fight till the end of time
I’m throwing down the gloves tonight
saying I rather not
rather not get pulled down into the mud
simply not good enough
that’s just not good enough
my meaning has more meaning
want everyone to believe me
and if they can’t see it
I’ll show them love and respect regardless
because this is about my salvation
always doubting myself
insecurities are poisoning me
taking my mind into dark places
such a head trip
making me wish I never said shit
what are people thinking?
do they even like me?
will anybody save me?
should I even care?
the answer is an overwhelming, no!!
sink or swim… but I plan on flying
feeling disrespected
always feeling the need to react
don’t want to fight till the end of time
I’m throwing down the gloves tonight
saying I rather not
rather not get pulled down into the mud
simply not good enough
that’s just not good enough
my meaning has more meaning
want everyone to believe me
and if they can’t see it
I’ll show them love and respect regardless
because this is about my salvation
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Re. My Salvation
9th Oct 2016 10:12am
DC you're taking the higher road a tough thing to do it's easier to do what comes naturally and fight..
excellent..
love Crim
excellent..
love Crim
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Re: Re. My Salvation
10th Oct 2016 12:37pm
It's always best to walk away. Being respectful even when disrespect shows you are the better person.
Though it is definitely not easy 😓
Thanks Crim!
Though it is definitely not easy 😓
Thanks Crim!
Re. My Salvation
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Re: Re. My Salvation
10th Oct 2016 12:40pm
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed 😁
Not many people do care if you're a good person or not. Though at least you'll know you have a clean soul. Not adding to the poison of the world is enough to keep me going.
Not many people do care if you're a good person or not. Though at least you'll know you have a clean soul. Not adding to the poison of the world is enough to keep me going.
Re. My Salvation
9th Oct 2016 3:16pm
Fighting the good fight is hard but always worth it. Stand tall and strong.
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Re: Re. My Salvation
10th Oct 2016 12:43pm
Standing strong for your soul is worth it. Not being selfish but being open even when others are closed. It's something I haven't done in the past, but something I'm trying to remember.
Thanks for reading 😁
Thanks for reading 😁
Re. My Salvation
9th Oct 2016 3:28pm
Powerful write, DC!
Standing above them shows strength and as I already wrote you:
"Take it, or leave it... your loss"
In your case... it's definitely their loss!!!
Standing above them shows strength and as I already wrote you:
"Take it, or leave it... your loss"
In your case... it's definitely their loss!!!
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Re: Re. My Salvation
10th Oct 2016 12:55pm
I didn't write this towards anyone really. I just feel like lots of times I get pushed to the side, or just looked at as I can't live up to being anything. I rather drown out that noise and not care what others think. But also try and show love, because you never know when you can change someone's mind.
Thanks for enjoying 😁
Thanks for enjoying 😁
Re. My Salvation
Anonymous
10th Oct 2016 12:44pm
Love this write.
It is much easier to give in, rather than guard your soul.
However, we are responsible for us, in the end. That fact is enough to keep the poison out.
Very profound write 💓
It is much easier to give in, rather than guard your soul.
However, we are responsible for us, in the end. That fact is enough to keep the poison out.
Very profound write 💓

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Re: Re. My Salvation
10th Oct 2016 12:59pm
Very true 😁
There is enough hate and doubt in the world. The best way to fight back is with love and respect. Just getting angry proves nothing.
Thanks friend 😁
Always lovely to hear your comments
There is enough hate and doubt in the world. The best way to fight back is with love and respect. Just getting angry proves nothing.
Thanks friend 😁
Always lovely to hear your comments
Re. My Salvation
10th Oct 2016 11:06pm
Truth to self is the best route to peace of mind. And you might meet some great like minded people along the way. Never know. This is a great write. :)
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Re: Re. My Salvation
11th Oct 2016 7:27am
I have met some great people too. It's always refreshing when you do meet those kind of people 😁
Thanks for enjoying
Thanks for enjoying
Re. My Salvation
17th Oct 2016 2:53pm
This is excellent my friend, for we wrestle not against flesh and blood but principalities, rise above always! Again, awesome write!
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Re: Re. My Salvation
17th Oct 2016 6:46pm
Thanks! Nice to have a new friend 🤗
And I like that. Rise above for sure 😁
And I like that. Rise above for sure 😁
Re. My Salvation
I should have saved this as best for last
because now ...my eyes are leaking..
o'goodness, my evening is not done yet..
thanks a lot my devilish one ! :)
-Howlings
because now ...my eyes are leaking..
o'goodness, my evening is not done yet..
thanks a lot my devilish one ! :)
-Howlings
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