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~in my depths~
the bubbling white surf
rushed to greet my passion
crashing down on me with it's intensity
~~~
sea foam delicacy
tasted the pearl of sensuality
in a cove of desire
~~~
here my secrets abide
vast and deep
kept in the ocean's locker
~~~
waves of passion
wash over my tender soul
kissing the darkness
~~~
open to the fear
of losing myself at sea
shipwrecked in love
~~~
your rigid nautical phallus
points due South
~~~
an isle for you to explore
lay claim to this place
uncover my hidden treasure
x marks the sweet spot
Published 3rd Oct 2016
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3rd Oct 2016 4:44pm
I love the theme you keep through the piece. A bit of lighter fare from you but still great emotion in your words. Nice write.
6th Oct 2016 11:01pm
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2016 5:44pm
*Excellent* ink, blended with a faint hint of eroticism ... I can smell the depth of the ocean from here ... Love is becoming you, my Queen ... love you ... ~Devlin.
6th Oct 2016 11:02pm
3rd Oct 2016 6:15pm
open to the fear
of losing myself at sea
shipwrecked in love
It's all about being open, Brenda.
Sail on, Silver girl. xo
of losing myself at sea
shipwrecked in love
It's all about being open, Brenda.
Sail on, Silver girl. xo
6th Oct 2016 11:02pm
3rd Oct 2016 7:11pm
Beautiful Brenda,
Excellent ink very sensual love poem with a hint of the erotic.
Such a beautiful blend of words and imaginary in this write. The write mirrors the writer in it's blend of complexity.
Love
Keith
Excellent ink very sensual love poem with a hint of the erotic.
Such a beautiful blend of words and imaginary in this write. The write mirrors the writer in it's blend of complexity.
Love
Keith
6th Oct 2016 11:03pm
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2016 7:55pm
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6th Oct 2016 11:03pm
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2016 9:51pm
Simply Luscious, and beautiful.. Brenda, this is so passionate.. love you!!
Dave
Dave
6th Oct 2016 11:04pm
Anonymous
4th Oct 2016 00:02am
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6th Oct 2016 11:05pm
4th Oct 2016 00:36am
6th Oct 2016 11:04pm
Anonymous
4th Oct 2016 1:39am
What a beautiful tide you've created here. Elegance with every word. :)
6th Oct 2016 11:05pm
4th Oct 2016 4:45am
This ink is all kinds of beautiful, Crim! :) Breathless lyrics, with a flawless image. xo
6th Oct 2016 11:06pm
4th Oct 2016 1:58pm
Such a lovely and sparkling piece, dear Crim!
You put a smile on my face :-)
Love, Duende
You put a smile on my face :-)
Love, Duende
6th Oct 2016 11:06pm
4th Oct 2016 8:43pm
You bring out the pirate in me Crim. Your depths dazzle me, every time. Fine work Lady!
6th Oct 2016 11:07pm
4th Oct 2016 11:22pm
deep blue poetry, Crim.
the sea of love is tough to navigate
& we're left floating on driftwood...
the sea of love is tough to navigate
& we're left floating on driftwood...
6th Oct 2016 11:09pm
6th Oct 2016 4:18pm
"in my depths" is right..... Loving the imagery, the lyrical flow and the soft touch of your words... Very soothing piece... I love how the passion just flows.... Great write....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
6th Oct 2016 11:07pm
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