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30th Sep 2016 6:24am
Dear Rain, I love visual poems and I really love this one!
That last stanza left me in awe... the three times 'still' fortifies the whole poem! Not that the poem needed it, but still ;-)
That last stanza left me in awe... the three times 'still' fortifies the whole poem! Not that the poem needed it, but still ;-)
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3rd Oct 2016 4:39am
lol... cute pun intended at the end there, Duende. :)
Thank you so much.....
Thank you so much.....
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30th Sep 2016 10:34am
OMFG!!! Yumminess n all that
is what this is! N it didn't hurt using a pic. Of one of the finest lookin'
women I've ever seen :)
is what this is! N it didn't hurt using a pic. Of one of the finest lookin'
women I've ever seen :)
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3rd Oct 2016 4:37am
uh.. so you're cheating with the side-piece in this pic, eh?! lol.. Flattered, but that's not me...c'mon man.... ;)
Maybe 10 years ago.... o_O
Thanks for the compliment and I'm elated you're keeping her...
Maybe 10 years ago.... o_O
Thanks for the compliment and I'm elated you're keeping her...
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3rd Oct 2016 4:40am
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30th Sep 2016 11:57am
Beautiful picture poem : ) Imagining waking in the moment to find this left on a note upon a pillow on the left side of my bed. The arousal of a dream, captured all day. How do you do this? How do you compose such beautiful ink? What inspires one so deeply? (oh how I remember so long ago that someone thought of me this way, sigh)
Stunning,,,,,,,
Stunning,,,,,,,
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I don't know how I do it, what or who inspires me, I don't know why my pen makes me her muse, then I muse my ass off... for the sake of musing my ass off, but I do know that left side of the bed sounds awfully familiar. ;)o_O HA. Thanks hun...
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30th Sep 2016 12:03pm
I love your style gurl, it is perfectly and uniquely you. Keep up with those visual allusions :)
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3rd Oct 2016 4:49am
...millions of visual allusions in my mind, trying their best to escape on paper. ;)
Thank you so much Jen... good seeing you....xo
Thank you so much Jen... good seeing you....xo
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30th Sep 2016 12:55pm
yeahhh, u spent some time in the vault of your vocabulary, had to Google a couple words, caliente, that means hot in Spanish (I think lol) ,nice goddess, I think u got everybody #sighing...
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...you could read me in any language and I wouldn't mind. ;) Thanks suga...
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30th Sep 2016 1:11pm
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3rd Oct 2016 4:54am
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30th Sep 2016 5:36pm
You have the most exquisite way of spreading words. Leaves one with a bit of an ache...I stand in awe of your skill! Absolutely stunning!
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...that's such a lovely compliment, Willow! :)
I'm so flattered by your words, Thank you dearheart.... xo
I'm so flattered by your words, Thank you dearheart.... xo
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30th Sep 2016 6:23pm
This takes my own breath away, Rain. It has elegance. Your erotics are intelligent, never tawdry and always arousing. Sigh.......
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3rd Oct 2016 4:59am
I sigh in your image, Crow! :) A beautiful statement that appeases me greatly.
Thank you luv and I'm delighted you've decided to keep her...
Thank you luv and I'm delighted you've decided to keep her...
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Anonymous
30th Sep 2016 7:41pm
Thank you for taking me on this journey.. gorgeous poem . Perfectly placed on your stunning picture.
✨Always peace Trish
✨Always peace Trish
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3rd Oct 2016 5:02am
I'm overjoyed you could take the journey with me, beautiful Trish! :) You make me smile! Thank you for the poetic love.. and appreciate you keeping her...
btw... beautiful pic indeed, but not me...xo
btw... beautiful pic indeed, but not me...xo
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Anonymous
30th Sep 2016 7:58pm
oh yes! That's what it's all about and you can say/do like no one ms. Rain :)
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3rd Oct 2016 5:03am
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3rd Oct 2016 5:04am
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1st Oct 2016 4:07am
most often a sigh can speak volumes..
yeah..this one seeps beneath Rain...
short..but everlasting..
yeah..this one seeps beneath Rain...
short..but everlasting..
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3rd Oct 2016 5:05am
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1st Oct 2016 5:15pm
Not only beautiful, poetic words but visual impact, too. Rain you continue to astound me!
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3rd Oct 2016 5:07am
...my funnyman, you continue to make my heart swell. :) Hugs Tony, thanks....
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3rd Oct 2016 4:40am
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5th Oct 2016 6:35pm
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3rd Oct 2016 5:06am
aw sexy summer Rain making me dreamy and a little dewy tonight ;)
beautiful sensuality..
love Crim
beautiful sensuality..
love Crim
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3rd Oct 2016 5:11am
lol... you are the definition of 'sensuality', Crim. ;)
Thank you darling, appreciate ya....xo
Thank you darling, appreciate ya....xo
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Anonymous
16th Oct 2016 2:08am
Lady Rain.. so lusciously inked..
Dave
Dave
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16th Oct 2016 3:36am
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3rd Aug 2017 9:14am
ohh. nice ...that works just fine...thank you for that slice of your mind...it was right on time....
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24th Dec 2017 2:07am
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13th Aug 2017 10:58am
This is such a sensual poem, such panache. I loved reading it and your writing style is lovely.
I absolutely love the background pic, compliments your words perfectly.
I absolutely love the background pic, compliments your words perfectly.
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24th Dec 2017 2:10am
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Anonymous
28th Nov 2017 11:18am
i wish you wrote a longer poem or at least used larger fonts...to get the whole picture!!!
:o)
seriously? it is beautifully penned visual dream!
loved it!
:o)
seriously? it is beautifully penned visual dream!
loved it!
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24th Dec 2017 2:11am