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she makes love dirty
she parades the boulevard like a whore in that dress, that
blue dress, with the odd rounded hem that dips demurely in
the back & rises to mid-thigh in the front. you could see her
legs, sleek & alluring, & figure she never wears panties.
she says I love you like it was brand new, like she never said
it to a man before. & I’d be in trouble big-time if I called her
lover, if I called her Tereska. if I called her mine.
in black pumps or barefoot, she comes on all debonair &
refined, just a few quickies shy of being a virgin, maybe. but
in her heart, in her dreams, she’s dirty.
she tells me things that make me solid & reckless like a
runaway train. I’d crouch like a tiger when she leans against
the wall in that blue dress, start at her ankles & lick my way
up to her bad girl, moody like the night & wet like the rain.
I search the broken skies & the cracks in the earth for the
beauty that art imitates, & I see it in her; & I am afraid, afraid,
of what she sees in me. she intrigues this disparate womanizer,
who has found romance to be a sojourn in the valley of hurt,
a journey of goodbyes.
the night drifts with us in our tears & our kisses & I hold her
close in our plaintive bed, where the sex is pure & beautiful
& love never sounded so dirty…
(Art: Dmitry Kuklin)
Published 29th Sep 2016
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29th Sep 2016 11:34pm
The picture you painted was so bold, vivid and beautiful to the eyes...Amazing imagery!
"I search the broken skies & the cracks in the earth for the
beauty that art imitates, & I see it in her; & I am afraid, afraid,
of what she sees in me. she intrigues this disparate womanizer,
who has found romance to be a sojourn in the valley of hurt,
a journey of goodbyes. "<---- off the chain!!
John, Mr. Romantic Casanova of dup, you constantly find ways to sate our appetites...
"I search the broken skies & the cracks in the earth for the
beauty that art imitates, & I see it in her; & I am afraid, afraid,
of what she sees in me. she intrigues this disparate womanizer,
who has found romance to be a sojourn in the valley of hurt,
a journey of goodbyes. "<---- off the chain!!
John, Mr. Romantic Casanova of dup, you constantly find ways to sate our appetites...
30th Sep 2016 00:09am
'she says I love you like it was brand new, like she never said
it to a man before. & I’d be in trouble big-time if I called her
lover, if I called her Tereska. if I called her mine.'
Beautiful,John. A perfect combination of soft,pretty words with that dirty,grittiness that love holds close. The artwork shows just that. So clever....
it to a man before. & I’d be in trouble big-time if I called her
lover, if I called her Tereska. if I called her mine.'
Beautiful,John. A perfect combination of soft,pretty words with that dirty,grittiness that love holds close. The artwork shows just that. So clever....
30th Sep 2016 3:56am
Enchanting as always John ...Beautiful Seductive Ink
Fav lines:
"she tells me things that make me solid & reckless like a
runaway train. I’d crouch like a tiger when she leans against
the wall in that blue dress, start at her ankles & lick my way
up to her bad girl"
.enjoyed the slow smoky sizzle ..runaway train instantly made me wanna hear Smokestack Lightning by Howling Wolf
Fav lines:
"she tells me things that make me solid & reckless like a
runaway train. I’d crouch like a tiger when she leans against
the wall in that blue dress, start at her ankles & lick my way
up to her bad girl"
.enjoyed the slow smoky sizzle ..runaway train instantly made me wanna hear Smokestack Lightning by Howling Wolf
30th Sep 2016 4:03am
freakingchristfofire..
damn my cherished,
I'm torn and feel dirty
too, so dirty after reading
this
gawsh.. . you make our
precious inner hells
cry
-Howlings
damn my cherished,
I'm torn and feel dirty
too, so dirty after reading
this
gawsh.. . you make our
precious inner hells
cry
-Howlings
30th Sep 2016 4:15am
"she intrigues this disparate womanizer,
who has found romance to be a sojourn in the valley of hurt,
a journey of goodbyes."
you intrigue me John with writes of sex and love never to be had..
love Crim
who has found romance to be a sojourn in the valley of hurt,
a journey of goodbyes."
you intrigue me John with writes of sex and love never to be had..
love Crim
30th Sep 2016 7:33am
30th Sep 2016 7:48pm
Dirty love and noir atmosphere, and irresistible combo. I particularly enjoy your distinction between love and sex. I'll take both on the dirty side.
Anonymous
1st Oct 2016 11:42pm
Sir John...good lawwwd....this right here.......!!!
"I search the broken skies & the cracks in the earth for the
beauty that art imitates, & I see it in her; & I am afraid, afraid,
of what she sees in me. she intrigues this disparate womanizer,
who has found romance to be a sojourn in the valley of hurt,
a journey of goodbyes."
Gorgeous...achingly gorgeous....
With love always - Taryn xoxo
"I search the broken skies & the cracks in the earth for the
beauty that art imitates, & I see it in her; & I am afraid, afraid,
of what she sees in me. she intrigues this disparate womanizer,
who has found romance to be a sojourn in the valley of hurt,
a journey of goodbyes."
Gorgeous...achingly gorgeous....
With love always - Taryn xoxo
