je' ne sais pas

"I am pacing like a beast locked away from his mate & I
promise her that no man could want her as much as I want her"

feel your intense passion John if only you would tame my beast ;)

seductive write..

love Crim

I kiss her & she is gone
but we never say goodbye…
So beautiful it hurts,but to say goodbye hurts much more,so we don't.

The title,the artwork,the tears,are worth more than one goodbye.....

theres some phone sex , hm....lol

intense, passionate and a pleasure to read

Your words have that certain je ne sais quoi that draws us in and down, down, down into the deep.

Some days call for french.

This would be perfect for the erotic category, which I know I've said about another of your poems, but it's true. The last two verses are the best, which is good, because you always want to end on your strongest note. When I read a poem on DU I always read it aloud, and yours lend themselves to such perfectly, because the sentences and clauses you construct roll off the tongue. It's funny how you write on mostly a single theme, and not just a single theme but a single narrative, too - a man having sex with or longing for a woman, or both - yet your poems don't feel repetitious in a bad way; there's always some new ostentatious metaphor or turn of phrase to make the whole thing new again. Thank you for the read. - Jack xxx

I love her pose in the second stanza.  This is very much a turn on, je le connais bien.

Sir John...I find this to be enticing and oh so real....captured beautifully as you always do...even in this scenario...there is certainly familiarity here for me...love, love, love....

"she’s pinching her nipples that I’m sucking in my beige room
somewhere, & her fingers, her fingers,  je’ ne sais pas

I am pacing like a beast locked away from his mate & I
promise her that no man could want her as much as I want her"

With love always - Taryn xoxo

What a great intense build up, i think this has got to be one of your best John as far as the tempo and slowly building the momentum, i truly enjoyed this and the ending as far as great endings go, it was wonderful but the content wins here, beautiful..hot, hot, burning hot lol

"she’s lying there, my voice at her ear
she’s wearing pajamas, & she’s much too sexy to be
unexposed, the loose top pushed madly above her tits
& the bottom in a glamorous mess below her knees,
she’s pinching her nipples that I’m sucking in my beige room
somewhere, & her fingers, her fingers,  je’ ne sais pas"

The M.O. since sixteen, strange men's voices specifically made for getting one off. Audioporn, what a gift. *sigh* Haha.

I could feel the blues...

I'm digging this whole piece. I remember these days
and nights, which are now skin on skin. Soul to soul.

Cleverly scribed.