Proper Lady

beautiful, Crim;
propriety won't last long,
desire is our aspiration.
great artwork too, from the vintage archives...

yes John you're right thank you..

love Crim

I'm wondering what kind of tea she is sipping ?

Do tell Brenda

Like this entry

Solid

tea with whiskey lol to loosen her tongue :)

thank you Poet..

love Brenda

Love can make fools of us all 😁

Good luck Crim 😉

yes it can thank you DC..

love Crim

I love the line "I dare you." It's balances all of the softness perfectly. A beautiful poem, absolutely.  :)

thank you lovely Tempted :)

love Crim

There is a change when speaking with someone and hearing their voice.  That anticipation is quite scary some times.  This is conveyed well here.  Nice write.

there is i'm afraid my voice will shake thank you for reading and understanding..

love Crim

Brenda
This is very understandable
because of the comfort zone
of the written word where you
are a Queen. To actually speak
and interact fluidly through conversation may be a bit
scary. Very enjoyed the piece
as always.

Loves
Keith

thank you dearest Keith yeah i'm a bit nervous about it..

love Brenda

This is the best thing i read in a long time.
I don't know what it is about this but its too real..I"m not sure if its the vulnerability of overexposing ourselves because in some twisted way pain will keep us feeling like humans, or shielding ourselves from disappointment.  Obviously, there's a lot here that i'm liking so i'm taking this with me Brenda.

thank you lovely Rina a better compliment I couldn't get.. it's shaky scary real.. i'm afraid I will either be disappointed or myself disappoint..

love you lady :)

xo Brenda

Ahh.. Malady Crimm. This is a fine piece of your art. Crafted as only you can deliver. Love for you Brenda.
✨Always peace Trish

thank you dearest Trish :)

love you..

xo Brenda

....add some vodka to that tea and call them back. ;) All my lovely Crim, this ink was so damn tender.

i'm about to break out the vodka ;)

thank you lovely Rain..

xo Crim

cleverly observed and intelligently themed as ever

thank you Sweet one..

love Crim

Oh Crim, dear Crim, the title alone :-)

so here I sit sipping tea          
proper woman          
suffocated by my corset > I have a hard time imagining that, yet... I love love love this poem!

thank you lovely Duende me being proper lol I know right?

love Crim

Exactly! That's why the poem is so fantabulous :-)

aw thank you beautiful :)

I so love this write 💓
The vulnerability is absolutely beautiful.
Amazing how certain souls, can turn a confident, sexy hellawoman- into a melting puddling, so quickly. It is euphoric and scary as hell at the same time.
I love this portion-

"make the first move            
I dare you            
turn me out            
or turn me loose"

Lovely ink.

thank you lovely heart for feeling my vulnerability in this write..

love Crim

Brenda ... Brenda ... Brenda ... is there nothing you CAN`T write these days? ... It`s obvious that your heart is in a different place; you and your pen have become much more serene, at peace, and from the demons ... A good thing or a bad thing? ... Whatever it is, I do love it & and of course, I love you ... I would be honored to bring you a cup of tea ... ~Devlin.

thank you my Queen yes I was having a beautiful day wish that it could always be so I love you..

xo Brenda

Gawd I swear you sow my
lips shut at time.. .wow honey,
I'm so speechless.. .

and sorry for this improper
comment,

damn it,, yes yes


-Howlings

love you lovely Howlings thank you..

love Crim

luved how you captured the apprehension with the refrain of hanging up the phone, your energy flows off the page, "small sandwiches" lol,nice Crim...

thank you Dean lol @ little sandwiches :)

love Crim

Even the most proper of women need to be turned loose and if they tell you otherwise,it's a lie.
This was truly a beautiful piece of poetry,Crim....

thank you lovely Kasai :)

love Crim

Well, if there's one thing I appreciate more than anything else, it's tea. They should just hook me up to a tea drip and be done with it. Good to see my blood-type in a poem.

Thank you for sharing.

thank you Missy for gracing my pages with a little wry humor :)

love Crim

Both a proper lady and Mistress Hyde, seems to me.  One must keep up appearances in polite company.  The transition from poems read here (particularly the extreme content) to "normal" conversation can be jarring.  Friends can still be made at DUP, thankfully.  Loved this Lady Crim!

thank you Sir Crow indeed they can :)

love Crim

Ha!  Lady harlot I know her, I am her.  💋

thank you Trix made me smile with your comment :)

love Crim

My Beautiful Brenda...your voice is a gift sent from the angels, nervousness within or not...kick back a shot (I shall have one with you), take a deep breath and be all that you are...the wonderful, loving, tender and powerful woman that is you! I hold you close lovely one.

I love you so much!

xoxo Taryn

beautiful one such a heart endearing comment.. afraid I get liquor in me i'm go from proper lady to brazen real fast lol  
;)

thank you lovely one I love you..

xo Brenda

Brenda.. truly blown away.. such a luscious ink.. love you..



Dave

aw thank you Dave :)

love Brenda