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I'll see you the way I want
to when I close my eyes.
Uncovered and unhidden....
wearing no disguise..
Deeply I shall look into
eyes that cannot lie...
Tell you how I love you..
give you reasons why..
I shall ask if the same is
deeply held for me..
Will see the truth in eyes
that never lie to me..
I know I will hear words
of love and devotion..
Words that drip of lust
and burning emotion.
Words that tell of unfulfilled
desires and dirty needs...
Words that scream of wants
and words that plead.
Words that tell me of all
your hopes and dreams.
Words from deep within
Words that truly mean...
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Re: Re. Words
29th Sep 2016 4:02am
Thanks you dear for your
read and comment. No empty
words or promises here.
thanks again
Keith
read and comment. No empty
words or promises here.
thanks again
Keith
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27th Sep 2016 7:52pm
A fine love poem knot2much. It really flows and the rhyme scheme works well, is never forced. I get the impression the love is unrequited in the last stanza. If that's the case just let her read this. Your words will win her heart.
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29th Sep 2016 4:04am
Sir Crow..
Thank you for you words of encouragement and your
confidence in me winning
her over... I am pretty sure
she is mine..
Keith
Thank you for you words of encouragement and your
confidence in me winning
her over... I am pretty sure
she is mine..
Keith
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27th Sep 2016 8:40pm
First I like to say Its been such a long time since I've read your work so I apologize for that.
And second like always your love poems never disappoint they are both beautiful, heartbreaking, and passionate.
I admire how each line comes to life in this write and as of result makes quite a remarkable piece.
And second like always your love poems never disappoint they are both beautiful, heartbreaking, and passionate.
I admire how each line comes to life in this write and as of result makes quite a remarkable piece.
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Hello Ms Jackson...
It has been a while since you have graced my page...but life happenes.
You have arrived and that's all that matters. I appreciate you warm words and thank you for the read and comment.
Loves
Keith
It has been a while since you have graced my page...but life happenes.
You have arrived and that's all that matters. I appreciate you warm words and thank you for the read and comment.
Loves
Keith
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27th Sep 2016 9:39pm
"Words that drip of lust
and burning emotion." sheesh, this might be your sweetest one yet k2m...
and burning emotion." sheesh, this might be your sweetest one yet k2m...
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Re: Re. Words
29th Sep 2016 4:08am
I am so glad to see you Dean.
I hope all has been well. I truly appreciate you stopping by .
Keith
I hope all has been well. I truly appreciate you stopping by .
Keith
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28th Sep 2016 00:52am
Love and passion at its best!
It's poems like these that give hope and make one (me) believe in true love again!
It's poems like these that give hope and make one (me) believe in true love again!
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Love is well and alive...
I promise my sweet lady..
Sometimes hidden in the
hurries of the day. Thank you
you for the read.
Keith
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28th Sep 2016 4:30am
...words caressed with actions have the perfect reflection to them. :)
Soft and tender lines in this little gem, Keith. Much enjoyed!
Soft and tender lines in this little gem, Keith. Much enjoyed!
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Re: Re. Words
29th Sep 2016 1:17pm
Ms. Rain,
Your words are so appreciated
your words offer encouragement in
them. Thank you much for the read
lovely talented lady.
Loves
Keith
Your words are so appreciated
your words offer encouragement in
them. Thank you much for the read
lovely talented lady.
Loves
Keith
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Anonymous
28th Sep 2016 4:53am
A truly beautiful masterpiece 💓
Filled with passion, love and a genuine outpouring of truth. Felt down in the depths.
Well done, my friend.
Filled with passion, love and a genuine outpouring of truth. Felt down in the depths.
Well done, my friend.
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29th Sep 2016 1:26pm
Thank you so much for for more than kind words. Words they move
us... They stir the emotions... Whether for good or evil. They have
power in them as all here know.
We must always use them with that understanding. Your words are always appreciated and looked
forward to.
Keith
us... They stir the emotions... Whether for good or evil. They have
power in them as all here know.
We must always use them with that understanding. Your words are always appreciated and looked
forward to.
Keith