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The Sound of Lutes
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You make me want to be your angel,
You make me want to be
like nothing you've ever known,
only to have the two worlds collide.
Let us link hearts and float away
to a place that defies everything,
effortlessly drifting, while we
flow in and out of each other.
If that could happen,
I would never look over my shoulder.
I would never let go and run away
because I would never let go.
If that could happen,
I wouldn't look back for the sound of crickets.
I would mesmerize to our bodies in unison.
Our eyes would stray toward the infinite
when the boundary of passion mutes,
where every night is a tantric journey
that would leave us vibrant
and resonant as the sound of lutes.
This is one of my much older poems I thought I'd dust off and give it a fresh posting here.
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You make me want to be your angel,
You make me want to be
like nothing you've ever known,
only to have the two worlds collide.
Let us link hearts and float away
to a place that defies everything,
effortlessly drifting, while we
flow in and out of each other.
If that could happen,
I would never look over my shoulder.
I would never let go and run away
because I would never let go.
If that could happen,
I wouldn't look back for the sound of crickets.
I would mesmerize to our bodies in unison.
Our eyes would stray toward the infinite
when the boundary of passion mutes,
where every night is a tantric journey
that would leave us vibrant
and resonant as the sound of lutes.
This is one of my much older poems I thought I'd dust off and give it a fresh posting here.
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Re. The Sound of Lutes
23rd Sep 2016 4:38am
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23rd Sep 2016 8:25am
Re. The Sound of Lutes
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2016 5:59am
Oh, Miss Jade(y) ... this was worthy of a pub ...
`effortlessly drifting, while we
flow in and out of each other.` <----------Ooh, Lady, this gave me chills ... stellar verse, I'm jealous! ... love to you ... ~Devlin.

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Re: Re. The Sound of Lutes
23rd Sep 2016 8:35am
And love to you, darling Devlin. I am awed by your embrace & support. ever, Jade(y)
Re. The Sound of Lutes
23rd Sep 2016 9:06am
Nostalgic, like the ebb and flow of a distant but familiar memory of passion. Wonderful write.
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23rd Sep 2016 10:21am
Re. The Sound of Lutes
23rd Sep 2016 11:33am
Your verses are vibrant - even if I do like the sound of crickets - that I find hypnotising - but not a patch on a lovely lute
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Re: Re. The Sound of Lutes
23rd Sep 2016 2:05pm
*warmly smiles*
Thank you... It's always special when I see you've come to visut me. I love your sweet sentiment, with grateful appreciation for the share. -Jade
Thank you... It's always special when I see you've come to visut me. I love your sweet sentiment, with grateful appreciation for the share. -Jade
Re. The Sound of Lutes
24th Sep 2016 4:24am
You had me at "I would mesmerize to our bodies in unison," I definitely felt that line!
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Re: Re. The Sound of Lutes
24th Sep 2016 6:36am
Ah, thank you so much, Queen Kimsey (if I may be familiar, and I hope that's correct). I really appreciate you stopping by for a read and a share.
And a warm welcome to you as you begin your tenure here at DUP. --always, Jade
And a warm welcome to you as you begin your tenure here at DUP. --always, Jade
Re. The Sound of Lutes
24th Sep 2016 1:03pm
If that could happen,
I wouldn't look back for the sound of crickets.
I would mesmerize to our bodies in unison.
Our eyes would stray toward the infinite
Just so...just so...
tommy
I wouldn't look back for the sound of crickets.
I would mesmerize to our bodies in unison.
Our eyes would stray toward the infinite
Just so...just so...
tommy
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