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Elements: Water
If this is not magic
then what else is?
defies all logic
forming life's basis
from the eye
from the skye
forming streams
stuff of dreams
water, you
what are you?
of elements that burn
and help stuff burn
yet ending up dousing
how come the magic turn?
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Re. Elements: Water
Anonymous
20th Sep 2016 2:07am
Perhaps water had been mistaken for fire and vice versa? ... Such an element does pack such a punch if given further thought to it ... Much to ingest here particularly on a wide range of opinions ... interesting take on words; brilliant in it's divinity ... ~Devlin.
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Re: Re. Elements: Water
20th Sep 2016 2:16am
Welcome MsDLC! I am humbled by your kind appreciation and deep insight... well you said it way better than I tried to write... i do consider this element that is water a divine gift... Thank You so very much for the visit and such beautiful feedback! glad is a small word ....
kind regards
KDAmB
kind regards
KDAmB
Re: Re. Elements: Water
Anonymous
20th Sep 2016 2:28am
My apologies for overlooking your work, KD ... I shall make it a point to visit you more often! ... And ``Thank You`` for your heartfelt welcome ... You made my night;) ... ~Devlin.
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Re: Re. Elements: Water
20th Sep 2016 2:33am
No MsDevlin... I only intend to share my scribbles..if my peers like it, it's more than a bonus for me! Your visit made my day..don't know how I didn't write it in the reply above! my sincere thanks to you once again!!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. Elements: Water
20th Sep 2016 2:08am
I think that so many things in life are magic,
writing is one of them
and yours is super cool I admit.
I love this as you can imagine :)
writing is one of them
and yours is super cool I admit.
I love this as you can imagine :)
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Re: Re. Elements: Water
20th Sep 2016 2:18am
Welcome MsPish..... your words echo Arthur C Clarke's!!
as I said above..glad indeed is a small word to recieve such awesome and generous appreciation.
Thank You so much once again!
Cheers!
KDAmB
as I said above..glad indeed is a small word to recieve such awesome and generous appreciation.
Thank You so much once again!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. Elements: Water
20th Sep 2016 6:50am
Such a beautiful Ode to Water!
The element we can't live without... our emotions...
Love this little jewel ♥
The element we can't live without... our emotions...
Love this little jewel ♥
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Re: Re. Elements: Water
20th Sep 2016 7:09am
Welcome dear friend Duende!!
Thank you so much for your generous appreciation and very kind feedback! More than glad you visited and liked this little scribble!!
☺
Thank you so much for your generous appreciation and very kind feedback! More than glad you visited and liked this little scribble!!
☺
Re. Elements: Water
20th Sep 2016 11:59am
KDAmB we often over look the magic and wonder of the elements themselves life is indeed full miracles.. thank you for reminding me with this beautiful write..
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Re: Re. Elements: Water
20th Sep 2016 12:12pm
Welcome Dear friend Brenda!
👍 Couldn't agree more!!! Yes all are aware what water's made of..elements that burn(hydrogen) and that helps burn (oxygen) yet the resultant mix is one which we douse fires with! Yes indeed a miracle! Your visit made me grin! Thank you my friend!
Cheers
KDAmB ☺
👍 Couldn't agree more!!! Yes all are aware what water's made of..elements that burn(hydrogen) and that helps burn (oxygen) yet the resultant mix is one which we douse fires with! Yes indeed a miracle! Your visit made me grin! Thank you my friend!
Cheers
KDAmB ☺
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20th Sep 2016 8:04pm
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