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Dorelian Rhapsody......
…...who's afraid of Virginia Woolf anyway? ♠️
she is a
beautiful Gypsy
Bohemian,
refugee
boho-chic,
non bourgeois
ubër sexy...
…..her intellectual seduction
a tantalizingly dangerous mind
lost in her bold, artistic attraction
her submission.....Mine.
the essence of
her shabby chic couture
loosely hanging
from her delicate shoulders,
sans corset,
unencumbered breast
bounce freely inside
the bodice of her dress
her svelte shadow
highlighted by the sun
golden hair tresses
tousled in the breeze......
…..she's come undone
as have I
enraptured
by my own
deeply, carnal desires
of this earthy pagan goddess
my oh my
“..... blue-eyed, sensual lady"
a deeply, probing question
coming into view
What would you do
if I plunged my soul
deep inside of you”
having masturbated
our minds
far beyond all pretension
tempting eminent fate
with decadent,
sinful little notions,
no inhibitions,
no apprehension
needing, wanting to fuck you......now
slight
of emotional resolve
giving way to our most
primal urges,
pressing your body
against the bedroom wall
moon shadows
capturing this sensual dance
in the night
dress heist above your hips,
the delicate roundness
of your derriere
against my body
my strong violation between
your alabaster thighs
beautiful Gypsy
what wouldest thou do
if I plunged my erotic soul
deep inside the core of you ?”
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Published 19th Sep 2016
| Edited 20th Sep 2016
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20th Sep 2016 6:22am
This is sinfully sexy indeed, this kind of redminds me of the song " lil red riding hood", but the description of the girl makes me think of a exotic, gorgeous, but hippie woman lol.
Great poem loved it.
Great poem loved it.
20th Sep 2016 12:59pm
20th Sep 2016 7:14am
she is a
beautiful Gypsy
Bohemian,
refugee
boho-chic,
non bourgeois > such a flowery description, love it!
It sets the tone for a wonderful piece, describing a gypsy to a tee (always wanted to be a gypsy)
One thing though... I would have chosen this song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TiozPXDHnYc
beautiful Gypsy
Bohemian,
refugee
boho-chic,
non bourgeois > such a flowery description, love it!
It sets the tone for a wonderful piece, describing a gypsy to a tee (always wanted to be a gypsy)
One thing though... I would have chosen this song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TiozPXDHnYc
Well thank you my dear for the comment. and the song, "Gypsy Woman".....I hadn't even thought of that one....would have been perfect. I love the Santana version for it's verve and rhythm but you can't miss with this one either:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zRHQZkFPGR4 😊
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zRHQZkFPGR4 😊
20th Sep 2016 1:14pm
....just had to throw this in, one of my fav Gypsy songs (I'm a huge Bonnie Raitt fan)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8T79QmeSEcs Luvs that "slide guitar"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8T79QmeSEcs Luvs that "slide guitar"
Love it... I might be wrong but I hear castagnettes?
I had them as a child, still have a painting of 'crying gypsy boy' in a very kitschy frame ;-)
Love the Bonnie Raitt song as well...
I had them as a child, still have a painting of 'crying gypsy boy' in a very kitschy frame ;-)
Love the Bonnie Raitt song as well...
20th Sep 2016 6:10pm
Oh my, your descriptive powers have stirred up a longing for the beautiful goddess gypsy in me as well. ;) This is wild and free and everything passion set ablaze should be! I love it! Good for you. Thank you for sharing.
20th Sep 2016 8:51pm
Favourite verse, for its description of her that goes well with the picture:
the essence of
her shabby chic couture
loosely hanging
from her delicate shoulders,
sans corset,
unencumbered breast
bounce freely inside
the bodice of her dress
Makes me too think of Santana's song "Gypsy Woman".
I might query the "golden hair" - I thought Romanies were not known for being blonde. (If they were, would the Nazis have been so eager to exterminate them with such an 'Aryan' characteristic?)
the essence of
her shabby chic couture
loosely hanging
from her delicate shoulders,
sans corset,
unencumbered breast
bounce freely inside
the bodice of her dress
Makes me too think of Santana's song "Gypsy Woman".
I might query the "golden hair" - I thought Romanies were not known for being blonde. (If they were, would the Nazis have been so eager to exterminate them with such an 'Aryan' characteristic?)
Anonymous
- Edited 11th Nov 2016 6:58pm
11th Nov 2016 6:56pm
I swear I felt every creeping
vine of rhapsody's strength
because right now, I do not
posses or have any.. Ive
enjoyed your pieces.
and I ask nothing in return.
Just excited to receive intense
fresh breaths.
vine of rhapsody's strength
because right now, I do not
posses or have any.. Ive
enjoyed your pieces.
and I ask nothing in return.
Just excited to receive intense
fresh breaths.
