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Creeper
Im awake
my mind teases
my soul with
thoughts of you
I shower, dress
and head to where
I know you will be
coffee
then I stare
I could stare at you
forever and a decade
to just look at you
I see you everywhere
sadly, you do not see me
even though you are looking
right into my eyes...
Published 16th Sep 2016
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16th Sep 2016 2:52am
awesome ink. Really enjoyed. I was really getting into it and then I scrolled down and it ended so abruptly. But I believe that's what made this so powerful. Excellent.
16th Sep 2016 3:58am
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16th Sep 2016 7:54am
I was going to say someone is very lucky, but it would seem that they do not understand how to show their appreciation. You always express yourself so divinely...
JJ
JJ
16th Sep 2016 9:31am
16th Sep 2016 11:00am
"Creeper" title nearly scared me away! lol BUT the ink is stunningly good, very deeply sad to know this 'invisible' feeling though...
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Anonymous
16th Sep 2016 10:14pm
There's something beautiful about the innocents of obsession. I think you've captured it well.
16th Sep 2016 10:20pm
You deserve his recognition and love dear Lady. His lack of response breaks my heart, his blindness at the breakfast table. I'd tell him to scramble his own eggs and head out the door. Fine work, but I'd consider a different title. "Coffee and Distance," maybe? Or maybe not. I love this whatever the moniker.
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2016 6:01am
I've really missed out not reading your work. You are an excellent poet.
