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For Our Love...A Requiem

It was a collage of �
Could haves �
Should haves �
Would haves.... �
That just racked my brain �
The pain of leaving you �
Left a stain �
Beneath my chest �
This second guess �
Is weighing me down with �
Too much regret... �
For not accepting your offering of a crown �
I should have bought you that wedding gown �
We could have easily escaped out of town �
To seek our justice of the peace �
�
Just us �
�
You and I �
With a new lease on life �
Husband and wife �
Running away like boy and girl �
Taking spontaneous cruises �
Around the world �
Toasting and coasting �
Between a sky deep with indigo blues �
And a shimmering ocean hiding �
The secret of pearls �
Where we exchange vows again �
In the night time �
The right time �
With the constellations shining �
As your bridesmaids �
And the moon would give you away to me �
I would take you by the hand �
And alone we would dance �
To the soft music of midnight waters �
I would twirl you �
Dip you �
Grip you back into my arms �
Slip you a kiss �
So nice... �
So warm.... �
�
The kiss of a lifetime.... �
�
That never came to be �
My name I never gave to thee �
Children that we'd never get to see
The pain just remained �
Too deep �
Our dreams never reaped �
Passion never sowed �
Because I owed it to my family �
So I pretend to live happily �
Stuck between the �
Realms of memories �
And make believe �
Lamenting on �
All the days �
When �
I ... �
�
Could have... �
�
Should have... �
�
Would have..... �
�
Came back to you... �
�
But didn't. �

Written by Naajir

Published 13th Sep 2016 | Edited 28th Nov 2018

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Writer23 (Unknown soul)

13th Sep 2016 1:37am

Powerful write

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DanielChristensen (The Fire Elemental)

13th Sep 2016 3:26am

This is simultaneously heartwarming and heartbreaking. That makes it a worthwhile journey. There is such emotion here. I love it.

As your bridesmaids
And the moon would give you away to me

Is my favorite bit. Really touching write. Namaste.

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Anonymous

13th Sep 2016 5:58am

Truly heartwrenching.
You turned pain...into such a beautiful write.
The depth of emotion is felt.
Amazing write 💓

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Anonymous

13th Sep 2016 7:42am

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standingmyground

13th Sep 2016 2:40pm

Heartbreaking write, if true (sounds like it is) even more heartbreaking. Families. Can be treacherous. I divorced mine many years ago. Haven't seen any of them in a long while. Back to your poem. Heartbreaking write!

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Anonymous

13th Sep 2016 3:50pm

aw Naajir, you wrote something we all have felt, thought and muttered over and over..if only, coulda, shoulda, woulda...
Heartbreakingly beautiful..you have a way with your pen like no other, i could dive into your words here and not want to come out for air, the world is at stand still floating in those memories, well done my friend.

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Chaoticwayz

14th Sep 2016 00:13am

Magnificent write man! I'll be enjoying this one regularly!

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Anonymous

14th Sep 2016 2:55am

Achingly beautiful write Naaj....just gut wrenching and deeply felt. My heart hurts to read this and I give yours a hug.

With love - Taryn xoxo

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Anonymous

14th Sep 2016 7:14am

Your poetry, as I have begun to read you. Is more than words delivering a vision of precisely penned thoughts. They for me, read as a precision of literature placed in a crafted puzzle of each thought you convey.
✨Trish