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Aftershave Redux
Splashing on aftershave
I used to wear years ago
When I was all about citrus
Sunny sky charm
Still love the scent
Feels different now
Like putting on an old fav shirt
Maybe a little tight but still with hope
I used to wear years ago
When I was all about citrus
Sunny sky charm
Still love the scent
Feels different now
Like putting on an old fav shirt
Maybe a little tight but still with hope
Published 11th Sep 2016
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Anonymous
11th Sep 2016 7:56pm
Nothing like nostalgia.. and a touch of hope.. big like..
Dave
Dave
11th Sep 2016 9:11pm
Anonymous
12th Sep 2016 1:54am
You should be proud of this girl....I read this entire piece as a play on words and I was liking it...I then read your reply to Dave (wink, wink) and I sit here shattered, ltm....but fuck it....I'm sticking with my first thoughts...
Read between the lines like
- S
xo
Read between the lines like
- S
xo
12th Sep 2016 2:33am
12th Sep 2016 12:32pm
it's funny how scents can transport us to a different time..
i'm sure you smell and are quite edible ;)
love Brenda
i'm sure you smell and are quite edible ;)
love Brenda
12th Sep 2016 1:11pm
Well, I do like to smell good. Only wear it on the weekends though. Kind of a reward for the week ....
